READ & CRITIQUE ALL GAY WEREWOLF STORIES
Heya everyone! People call me eveningdownpour and I am sick and tired of seeing junk in the gay werewolf genre on here so I decided to try to do something about it! Even though my works aren’t the most popular, I’m very confident in my writing-related skills (editing etc.), and want to help you (yes you!) if you are writing gay werewolves!
Here’s an example of some editing I’ve done:
Medical student Drika van Meer investigates a child’s supernatural illness.
What kind of illness? This is so vague it makes me feel like they have the ghost measles. I’m sure you can describe it in a more exciting manner.
With help from her arranged date, she uncovers a conspiracy involving the Holy Imperial College, the Prince of Orange, and a mysterious sea creature with a taste for blood.
This has interesting details that want me to read more, but arranged date just doesn’t quite cut it. Maybe describe the arrangement of the date - “with the help of the hapless chap her father had set her up with”, or something of the sort, or maybe give him a name or defining characteristic.
More coming once I start editing some of your stories!
So, if you’re writing anything with gay werewolves, please feel free to drop a link here an I will definitely read & critique it! I will either edit in the comments (by default), or if you would like, I’m happy to edit in a drive document if you link me that, or send a general critique through the message system. If you just want a read, that’s fine too!
I do not expect ANYTHING in return. I just want to make the genre a better place