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#21

It’s not an awkward request at all! I’m happy to read the parts you’ve asked!

Accepted and you are next in line, so you can expect feedback within the next few hours.


#22

Chapters 1-3 have been read and feedback left!


#23

I hope you do poetry reviews :blush:
I’d love it if you’d give my little collection a try. It is but a piece of my heart!
I finished all your uploaded chapters and left some comments :slight_smile:

Title: Collection Of Poetry
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/179894308-collection-of-poetry
Genre: Poetry

To Read:
Love or Pain?
Something About You
I Vow

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#24

I’ve read Chapters 4 and 5 of the first one, and chapter 1 of Ugly and left feedback on all. Keep up the good work!


#25

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Genre: Werewolf
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/158120403-denying-fate
Chapters: First 3, please!

I would love if you could look for plot development, interesting endings of chapters, characters (development and dialogue). After reading the first chapters, would you read the rest of the book? (That’s the goal for readers.) Thanks so much!


#26

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Story Title: Wild
Genre: Werewolf
Which Chapters (up to 3): The first three :smile:
Link:* https://www.wattpad.com/story/183740420-wild
Anything you’d like close attention to (i.e. character development, world building, etc): World development in particular, your impression of the main character, length of the chapters and whether the plot flows okay and has enough action.

I have read your first three chapters, and commented :kissing_heart:


#27

Hi! You wouldn’t mind checking out my story would you? It’s my first time writing on Wattpad and I just wanted to get feedback on how my writing currently is and how interesting the book and its plot is in general. Many thanks!
Title: Bride In The Voyage
Main Genre: Romance-Comedy
Summary:
Pain. Laughter. Happiness. Emotions run untamed as Miles Bateman pursues the love of his life, Harriet Pollard. Along with his lifetime friend Ronnie Herman, Miles goes through a rollercoaster of events, both good and bad, at most times being funny, until that dreadful day came. It was complete pandemonium, screaming and crying everywhere; this put Miles’ loyalty to the test, to not only save his friend and love, but rather himself from quietus. The only problem is, how?

Link: https://www.wattpad.com/633187433-bride-in-the-voyage-chapter-i-origination


#28

Chapters 1-3 have been read and feedback left. Great job!


#29

Oops I’m sorry:’( But I read your coments and they were very helpful. Thank you so much!


#30

Story Title: Outrunning the Color Gray
Genre: YA (action)
Chapters:1-3
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/myworks/183733754-outrunning-the-color-gray-a-trilogy-book-one

Description: Caleigh (Cal) has vague memories of death when a man named Artemius gives her the choice to become a guardian angel. A light-wielding being meant to protect and serve. In making this choice, she’s left with no memories of her past, save for one that she won’t recall until after her hundred years of training. Added to this, she runs the risk of dying as an angel and becoming one of the countless and isolated stars in the sky. Regardless, she agrees, and even without her memories, Cal is forced to realize that her soul remembers darkness well. As she and her partner, Allete, fight their way through training, they realize that the darkness residing in Cal may very well be her end, even before she gets to earth.

Should you chose to read it, I do hope that you enjoy it! I’ll have a look at yours, now.
Cheers!
-Nicole Goodspeed


#31

Chapter 1-3 read and feedback left. I really enjoyed your story!


#32

Hi there!

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Thank you for understanding! :yellow_heart:

Irena

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#33

Chapters 1-3 read and feedback left!


#34

Chapters 1-3 read and feedback left for you!


#35

I’ve read the selected poems and left you feedback! Thank you again for the feedback you left for me!


#36

Thank you. I look forward to reading what you have to say. :grinning:


#37

Chapters 1-3 have been read and feedback left for you!


#38

Chapters 1-3 read and feedback left!


#39

I’ll be read your story first thing tomorrow morning EST!


#40

I’ll be reading your story tomorrow morning EST!