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#41

Many thanks!


#42

Chapters 1-3 read and feedback left!


#43

Chapters 1-3 read and feedback left!


#44

BUMP!

I need more stories to critique!! I want to read your story! :slight_smile:


#45

Story Title: All Roads Lead Home
Genre: Mature Romance (not really mature til later on)
Which Chapter: 1-2
Link: here
Anything you’d like close attention to (i.e. character development, world building, etc): I’m open to any sort of feedback. Thank you


#46

Read your first 2 chapters and left feedback!


#47

Story Title: 王(Rewriting)
Genre: Fantasy
Which Chapters (up to 3): 1
Link: here
Anything you’d like close attention to (i.e. character development, world building, etc): pacing and immersiveness


#48

Read your chapter and left you feedback!


#49

Story Title: Anything on my page :slight_smile:
Genre: Fantasy / Thriller / Chicklit
Which Chapters (up to 3): Either first three of Into the After or 2 in But a Dream and 1 in Cide of Conduct :slight_smile:
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/user/Uncomfortablewriter
Anything you’d like close attention to (i.e. character development, world building, etc): Just if it’s attention grabbing or bland :slight_smile:


#50

I went for the second option (2 and 1) and I’ve left feedback for you on each!


#51

Story Title: 12:01
Genre: teen fiction
Which Chapters (up to 3): 1-3
Link: above
Anything you’d like close attention to (i.e. character development, world building, etc): attention grabbing, storyline, character development and realistic please! thank you so much!


#52

Story Title: Beyond His Green Eyes
Genre: Teen Fiction
Which Chapters (up to 3): 1-3
Link: Here!
Anything you’d like close attention to (i.e. character development, world building, etc): Character development, descriptions, and dialogues.

Thank you so much for doing this! x


#53

First three chapters read and feedback left for you!


#54

Thank you so much! <3


#55

Payment will be completed tomorrow! It’s late here haha


#56

https://www.wattpad.com/story/182965135-the-colour-of-your-voice 1

THE COLOUR OF YOUR VOICE

What happens when a death row prisoner and a prostitute falls in love? A short story of mine, only 3 chapters, perfect length! I hope you like it!

Genre: Romance, tragedy with elements of mental illness


#57

Read your first three chapters and left feedback on each!


#58

It’s extremely helpful! Thank you so much! I’ll get done with yours by tonight, I promise! x


#59

Story Title: Obsession
Genre(s): mystery/thriller
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/11902749-obsession
Which Parts: chapter 1-6 if possible
What You’re Looking For: honesty

Thanks ill start payment once accepted


#60

I read the first 3 sections and left feedback!