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#61

Accepted, I’m starting it now.


#62

To be clear though, the payment is chapter for chapter. So if you read just one of my short stories, that is only one chapter. Just want to keep it fair for everyone :slight_smile:


#63

Read mine and I’ll read yours?

Read here!

Genre: Romance/Young Adult/New Adult
Four chapters published
Follow for follow! :slight_smile:
Accepting feedback!

Thank you guys!


#64

Uh, I’ll read this one!


#65

I read your short story and left a comment/feedback! :slight_smile:


#66

Story Title: Game of Mass Destruction
Genre: Dystopian Sci-fi
Which Chapter (just 1): Prologue
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/718947454-game-of-mass-destruction-dystopian-sci-fi-prologue
Anything you’d like close attention to Whatever you think off.


#67

Story Title: The Elements
Genre: Fantasy
Which Chapters (up to 3): Prologue, really the only one published rn
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/711398533-the-elements-the-god-of-new-york
Anything you’d like close attention to (i.e. character development, world building, etc): is there too much dialogue?


#68

Read your first chapter and left feedback for you!


#69

Thank you, I truly appreciated all the feedback you left for me! It was amazing. I’ll try to read more of your work. I thoroughly enjoyed the short story so I’ll read more as soon as I can!


#70

Read your prologue and left feedback for you!


#71

Read your prologue and left feedback for you!


#72

Thanks so much!


#73

Story Title: somebody to you
Genre: Fanfiction (the only that makes it one is the name of a handful of people and how they look)
Which Chapter (up to 3): 01 to 03
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/173025984-somebody-to-you-➸-bradley-simpson
Anything you’d like close attention to (i.e. character development, world building, etc): anything you feel the need to comment on


#74

Read your first three chapters and left feedback on each!


#75

Thank you and I left some comments on the first three chapters of your book as well.


#77

Hi! If you still are taking requests, could you read m three chapters?
I will, of course, read yours and try to leave feedback, I feel like I am not that good a giving feedback but I will try!!!.
Title:Sterling Monsters
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Genre: Horror- Multiple genres since is an anthology. This Story is Horror/Romance
Status: Ongoing.
Author: mutantsquirrel

(Also the previous comment was published before it wasn’t finished and i preferred deleting it than editing it, sorry again.)

I hope you enjoy the chapters!
Watpadsignature


#78

I’ll read one of your short stories in the morning and drop you some feedback. It’s 2am here and I need some sleep.


#79

Done


#80

Story Title: Velvet Garden
Genre: Fantasy
Which Chapters (up to 3): 1
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/180988412-velvet-garden
Anything you’d like close attention to (i.e. character development, world building, etc): story pace, character development, purple prose


#81

First three chapters read and feedback left!