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Story Title: Unmedicated
Genre: General Fiction
Which Chapters (up to 3): Prologue, 1-2
**Anything you’d like close attention to (i.e. character development, world building, etc):**n/a
Prologue and chapters have been read and feedback left!
Title: The Transcendent Vindicator
Which Chapters: 1-3
I desperately need somebody to let me know if any of the characters, especially Abigail the protagonist, aren’t well-rounded, 3-dimensional characters.
Thank you for doing this!! I will gladly check out your story
I’ll be getting to this tomorrow morning
Thank you so much!!
I left comments on your first chapter
You’re welcome! Feedback has been left on your first three chapters.
Feminism for Dummies
Independent and sassy, Kala is not afraid to talk about sensitive topics and make fun of them.
She will lit the world of fire by throwing unique jokes, telling the most unpredictable stories, making her crowd cry from laughing and presenting a peculiar perspective of things: a woman’s point of view.
You are not going to be the same after you meet Kala!
This is my first time writing oh I’m nervous
I’m excited to read your story, I’ll give you feedback too
I read your story and left you feedback!
Hi there! I’d love if you could give the first chapter of my book a read. I’ll be posting more chapters shortly, as well.
Title: The Pineapple Fountain
Genre: New Adult (romance/adventure)
Is there too much description? Are the characters interesting and distinct? Is it interesting enough to make you want to keep reading?
Read your first chapter and left feedback for you!
would you read some poetry? If so…
Story Title: Enlighten Me
Which Chapters (up to 3): mirrors, third eye, scarlet prose
Anything you’d like close attention to (i.e. character development, world building, overall flow and meaning
Read and left feedback on each!
Thank you so much for reviewing my story, this will help a lot!!
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