Hi everyone! I am offering feedback for your book in the form of reactions and critiques! I’ll leave what I liked, what I feel like could be improved, etc. etc.
I don’t have any specific genre that I won’t read. However, if it’s erotica I won’t give in-depth critiques of any erotic scenes because I just don’t really that lol. Also, I can read both English and Spanish, so if your book is in Spanish feel free to request! However, my book is in English- so you’ll have to be able to read it to enjoy it properly lol.
This’ll work the same way most r4r’s work- I’ll read/comment on the same amount of chapters you do on mine! My books is still in-progress, but to be fair you can comment on both chapters and non-chapters! You’re comments don’t have to be too long (though I’d still like some feedback lol.) Also, please wait for me to accept your form before doing the payment! I don’t have any books I won’t read so more than likely I’ll still accept- but just to be sure
Link to Story
✴ amias love is the son of the greatest fire mage alive. when he enrolls in the top mage-training school, merlinus academy, he forms an unlikely bond with the son of his father's greatest enemy and a girl with a love for causing trouble. the three expect to face nothing more than cruel teachers, bad grades and failed potions, but they encounter an issue much greater. the prophecy of cerberus, a prediction that everyone perceived to be nothing more than a childish myth, calls for three souls to come together and embody the guard of hell, cerberus. the last thing amias would expect was that he and his two new friends would be those souls. with allies and foes teaming up to hunt them down, the three must rely on only each other to save their lives and possibly more.
1. The Moment We Met
2. The Heart That’s Inside
3. Here We Go Again