I know it is frustrating when you have a fantastic book but u don’t have enough people reading, I am on the same boat with my new story.
Soooo I have a time to read and feedback on your book. Up to 50 books (1 book per person)

Instructions: Read my new book: “Roommates with the bad boy” give feedback please so I know you have read it. If you read only Chapter one I will read two chapters and if you read both chapters and give feedback I will read up to five chapters




I’ll read your story!


I will definitely check it out!


I would love some feedback on my story; it’s an Epic Fantasy story (if you enjoy reading it, feel free to keep on reading!)
Title: The Legend of the Moonflower Princess
Short Summary: After her adopted younger brother is kidnapped by the minions of a mad sorcerer, a young woman must journey through a magical world in order to rescue him.


Hey. Can you read my story and leave a comment on things I can improve? Thanks. I’ll read yours as well and leave a review.


I will it if you read mine

"Waiting for her love " @hardeynyhun


I’m checking it out as I type this!
I would love if you checked this out:
I have three chapters out currently :slight_smile:
Thank you :heart:


Count me in!



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Hey there! I’d love some feedback on my Open Novella Contest Entry


I’ll gladly read both chapters of your story :yum:


Thank you! :slight_smile:


anyone else?


I’d love to check out your book! I’ll read both chapters and comment on them with feedback! :slight_smile:

You can read my story here:

Eden Waters life is far from normal.
Part of the Paranormal Crime division her department focuses on hunting down and punishing paranormal creatures that don’t follow the law. When the master vampire of the United States enlists the help of Eden and her team, Eden’s life gets complicated. Join Eden as she works with a master vampire, the leader of the shifters, and other paranormal creatures to solve this murder. Will she catch the killer? And what will she do when the two leaders of the paranormal want her for themselves?

Authors note: This is an ongoing story* Updates for this story will occur at least once a day. Hope you enjoy!


Read and commented on both chapters of your story. Also followed you for future updates. :slight_smile: Let me know once you check out my story :slight_smile:


Heyyyy I’m writing a fanfiction on BTS’s J-hope (Jung Hoseok) and it’d mean a lot if you checked out my book!
I’ll definitely read both of yours chapters and give feedback!


It’s ongoing and even though i upload 2-3 times a week, most of my chapters are 5000 words or longer, except for the first ones xD


I’ve already done it! Hope to hear back from you soon :slight_smile:


anyone else


Always willing to read someones story!

Here is mine. I should be able to get to yours within the next couple of hours.


anyone else?