Hello, I would love for you to read my 5 chapters! I will read your two chapters f you accept!

Title: The Fall of Mangiatorvi
Genre: Fantasy, Young Adult
Gemma has spent the majority of her life feeling like an outcast, struggling to hide her powers in a mortal world. Suddenly, in a whirlwind of violence that leaves her heartbroken, she is recruited to Mangiatrovi University for the Gifted. Under the dual mentorship of the crown prince and a gifted fighter with intimacy issues, she somehow manages to earn their loyalty. Tensions are rising in the government as the country is on the brink of both civil war and war with the bordering state. Gemma struggles to navigate a new world, searching for normalcy amongst friendships, romance, and politics.




Sure, I’d love for you to check out 5 chapters, and I’ll def read your two if you give me the go-ahead.

Here’s the book:


I read and commented on your first two chapters (:


Can you give me critiques for my book, The Lost Queen?
I would appreciate it if you do. I will do the same for your book .


go ahead


I will read ur story but its a Read for Read. when you give feedback on mine Ill read urs




I have a incomplete book I started a few days ago, looking for reads for reads and honest reviews of my book so far. am new to sharing my stories it may suck but looking for feedback anyways lol thanks

title: The Pirates Daughter

its about a 17 year old girl named Kira, who is turning 18 she was kidnapped at a few days old. her real mother died in childbirth, and her real father is a pirate king, who has been looking for her for 18 years, Shes don’t know she was adopted (kidnapped), but a couple of guys are about to come into her life and shake her world. all because of a mission that had nothing to do with finding the lost pirate princess, so choices will have to be made, and hearts will be broken.





I think you’d like this story: “The Muslim Fiction Awards OPEN” by Muslimfictionawards on Wattpad



sorry for the delay. will get to ur book soon


you need to give feedback on my story first


Title: Him & I
Genre: Teen fiction
Summary: A girl with strong integrity who won’t hesitate to deviate from the society’s expectations meets a guy who fits himself to the society’s expectations.
How many chapters: 7
Already checking out your book! :heart_eyes:


i’m in sis! here’s mine