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#202

Okay, I am currently reading it, expect a lot of comments!


#203

Done! :hugs:


#204

And you just moved to spot #3 for completing payment sooner than the original 3rd :smiley:


#205

Aw, thank you! :smile::blush:


#206

Prologue and up to chapter ten, hm? That can be done

II III - II III - II III - II III - II III - I


II III - II III - II III - II III - II III - I


#207

@dAYoFtHEdECAF

Your grammar was relatively good, save for some missing commas here and there. However, I still can’t get used to the fact that it’s only dialogue, with no description or emotions or anything to indicate the scene and scenery at all


#208

I appreciate all the feedback. I will have to go through and straighten things up. Thanks


#209

https://www.wattpad.com/story/98878993-rosevelt (whoops sorry)

and none equal to 5k word, all of them are between 1-3k, first 3 chapters are under 2k.


#210

I think you do not understand me.

Are the first three chapters together less than 2k words? Or is each 2k? And how many chapters together would make 5k words (example: three chapters, one of 2k words and two of 1.5k or something)


#211

IIIII - IIIII - IIIII
IIIII - IIIII - IIIII
IIIII - I

IIIII - IIIII - IIIII
IIIII - IIIII - IIIII
IIIII - I


IIIII - IIIII - IIIII
IIIII - IIIII - IIIII
IIIII - I

IIIII - IIIII - II


#212

Name: @FieryArtemis
Title: Ranger Rising
Genre: Fantasy
Size of Chapters: Earlier ones are closer to 2500 words but later ones are closer to 1000
Summary:

Everyone has their place in the world. Fate is inescapable so it does little good to fight it.

Lena Rivers has been told this her entire life. She’s a farmer’s daughter. One day she will marry, have children, and be a farmer too. That’s the way things work. Lena absolutely hated the idea of being a farmer or the wife of one. There had to be more to life than what everyone told her. However, that seemed to be the life she was destined for.

Until the traces of a large beast, larger than anyone in her town had ever seen, were discovered on the outskirts of the forest. The mayor of her small town hires Aust, an elfin King’s Ranger to root out and destroy the beast. When Lena meets him she finds herself absolutely taken at the sight of his longbow and massive stag and falls in love with the prospect of becoming a ranger. However, if she wants to be of any use to find the monster that’s terrorizing her home then she has a lot to learn.

https://www.wattpad.com/story/148366513-ranger-rising


#213

Are earlier ones the first two chapters?


#214

First two or three I think.


#215

Would you be okay with reading two chapters of The Alpha’s Flame and three of The Bad Boy Mage? In return, I’d read two of yours, so we both read roughly 5k words


#216

Yeah, of course. It will have to wait a few hours because I’m off to work but I’ll start working on it tonight!


#217

Take your time :slight_smile: I’ll probably do the next review tomorrow. The second person in the queue never completed payment, so you are technically second


#218

Oh god sorry I feel so stupid,
I think first 2 Chapters would equal under 5k, 3rd chapter puts it above 5k


#219

How high above 5?
And it’s fine :slight_smile:


#220

3 chapters would approx equal 5.5k


#221

Ah, that’s close enough.

Would you be willing to read the first two chapters of The Alpha’s Flame and three of The Bad Boy Mage in return?