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#262

Thanks!


#263

Just to be sure, is your prologue 3,000 too?


#264

My prologue is a little over 1000


#265

Ah, then I might as well do that one too


#266

That would be great! Thank you!


#267

@Raina127

There you go :smiley: It looks like you have some serious issues with dialogue and commas, though. You might want to google English grammar, or take a look at my grammar book, as I go over dialogue and commas in detail there


#268

@FieryArtemis @SpeakWhenItRains

Both of you have not completed payment and it’s been a week (or longer). My queue is now empty, if you still want


#269

Yeah, thanks so much for the feedback!! I am definitely going to do heavy revisions and edits to make the story more appealing to new readers!


#270

Go ahead and take me off please. Thank you for being patient and giving me more than an ample chance. Unfortunately, life got really busy for me this week and this weekend is looking super crazy as well.


#271

Completely off or just on the on hold list?


#272

There’s a hold list???

Can you put me on the hold list? I’ll figure out my life/get it back on track soon!


#273

You actually are already on the hold list with the other person I tagged. I figured it was about time to let you know you were on there


#274

Thanks I appreciate it! I meant to get it done a lot sooner.


#275

Nah, take your time. There’s no hurry. My agenda is free for the next few months


#276

Well, I actually just split my first chapter into two so it’s around 4,000ish words


#277

Would you be okay with reading the first three chapters of The Alpha’s Flame (~3.000 words) in return for your first chapter? You get the better end of it :stuck_out_tongue:


#278

payment completed


#279

There you go


#280

Bump!


#281

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