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#162

This, may has sex, but it is not romantic, and is used as a means to torment people.


#163

Sex counts as far far worse than kissing – especially if it’s not in a romantic way


#164

I guess, it could be.

I would not call it sex personally, but I guess I cannot join in this sadly =[.


#165

I’m sorry but I’m going to have to deny you


#166

Hi, FireAlwaysReturns (love your username!)

Here’s my filled-out form :slight_smile:

Name: SpeakWhenItRains
Book title: Grazing the Sky
Genre(s): Fantasy, Sci-Fi, Romance (sub-plot)
Summary:
There are beings living at the center of the Earth. Deep within the molten core - which acts as a barrier to keep away humans - lies Razaleks and Spiros, both at frail peace with one another. Razaleks: tall, elf-like energy manipulators. Spiros: humanoids that are born from beasts, the nearly invincible energy locked inside their bodies released upon near-death.

After being kidnapped from his hometown and mysteriously injected, Lance isn’t human anymore - at least not completely. There are Spiro cells swimming in his veins, and there’s also a thin shred of hope: help from half-Spiro, half-Razalek Zidane. But Zidane has his own reasons, an adventure that travels through memories and awakens something of a heroic tale entwined with an everlasting love.

Size of chapters: About 1k per part (long chapters are split into parts)
Link: Story here


#167

I like the sound of this plot.

Can I make a special deal with you?


#168

Fire away!


#169

Ironic, considering what I’m about to say.

I just published the first chapter of a new story (The Alpha’s Flame) a few days ago. Just like The Bad Boy Mage, the chapters are ~1,000 words. Would you be okay with reading the first chapter of TAF and the first four of TBBM instead of simply five of TBBM?


#170

Absolutely.


#171

the fire pun we just made tho :laughing:


#172

You better not have many puns in your actual book :stuck_out_tongue:

4 + 1 chapters of mine for 5 of yours. That good?


#173

haha yes that’s totally fine


#174

I do love puns but, no, not many in Grazing


#175

I’ve gone over the one and four. I hope what I’ve left is helpful, and I’ll be keeping an eye on The Alpha’s Flame :wink: Let me know if ever you want to exchange more.


#176

I saw it. I’ll have to go through my comments to reply to all of you, and then Decaf is first, but you are second on the list :slight_smile:

Your feedback was great. Seriously


#177

A small boop


#178

And another one


#179

Would you spam my book Rocket Web?


#180

That depends. If you fill out the form in the first post, it’s easier to decide


#181

[quote=“FireAlwaysReturns, post:1, topic:37632”]
Form:
Name: @ChangingFace
Book title: Rocket Web
Genre(s): Contemporary Romance
Summary: Sheldon Wyatt was used to having everything go his way. Until his identity is stolen and he goes on a character study of his life.
Size of chapters: not sure around 1k to 2k
Link:https://www.wattpad.com/640283491-rocket-web-chapter-1/quote]