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#1

Hello!
I am a new writer on Wattpad and am offering read-for-read service only for the first twenty slots. I will just read a max of 3 chapters. Please know I am a very busy person and try my best to read all of your stories as soon as possible. :sweat_smile: :heart:

Note: I enjoy reading, but I am not skilled in critiquing due to that I am not a professional. I have opened this form to discover new books that I might enjoy to read. I will comment on what I have liked from your book to indicate that I have read your story. :grin:

Please complete the form below:
Username:
Genre:
Blurb:
Link to story:
Payment: (if complete or not)

Payment: read 1-3 of my chapters https://www.wattpad.com/story/177458562-leather-feather
Comment at the end of the chapters what you have liked or what needs to be improved to show that you have read my book :heart:

  1. @jgrace2197 (completed)
  2. @FanFicFanatic (completed)
  3. @WaterRaven (completed)
  4. @amyschmitty (completed)
  5. @Nina_Amari (completed)
  6. @Kumoma (completed)
  7. @Writerthoughtss (completed)
  8. @skylerFrey (completed)
  9. @Arkotract (completed)
  10. @spxcedream (completed)
  11. @Josiedennise (completed)
  12. @missyq0814 (completed)
  13. @Eden20157 (completed)
  14. @CMF_Wright (completed)
  15. @modestmeri (completed)
  16. @TastelessWriter (in progress)

This topic will close once the first twenty slots are filled.


#2

I would love some feedback on my story!

Username: jgrace2197
Genre: Fantasy, High Fantasy, Epic Fantasy
Blurb: After her adopted younger brother is kidnapped by the minions of a mad sorcerer, a young woman must journey through a magical world in order to rescue him.
Link to story: https://www.wattpad.com/691606982-the-legend-of-the-moonflower-princess-where
Payment: Not complete


#3

I have read your story
please complete payment :grin:


#4

Check out my book, its the first book I have ever written and it is still a work in progress. If you like D.C. then you’ll want to check this one out!

Title: 7 Weeks
Author: Me (FanFicFanatic__)

About:
Robin just turned 15 last week and is allowed to go on more solo-missions. Nothing could ever go wrong, well at least Robin thought. He now finds himself in Jokers hands, Batman’s worst enemy. Robin has to stay strong. He can’t let the Joker win. Nothing could ever go wrong, could it?

Welp!!! My book is a work in progress but please check it out and comment your thoughts XD


#5

payment complete (I read and commented on 3 chapters)


#6

Username: @WaterRaven
Genre: Urban Fantasy

Blurb:
Darren is dead. Confused and unable to figure out what has happened to him, he reaches out to the only person who can see him, Cecile. She is a mysterious young woman with a bizarre roommate and strange abilities. Alone and filled with questions, Darren quickly latches on to Cecile, who, for reasons of her own, wants nothing to do with him. Forced together, they will set off on a journey that will change them both forever.

Link to story: https://www.wattpad.com/602778357-i-fell-in-love-with-a-necromancer-i'm-dead

Payment: Not complete. Will read right after this post.


#8

Thank you so much!


#9

Done! Please complete payment


#10

Done! Please complete payment :heart:


#11

Hello! :grin:

Username: amyschmitty

Genre: fantasy/horror

Blurb:
Ten-year-old Teddy’s great-grandma Rose is an enigma. She lives alone in her strange old house, hoards hundreds of newspapers, books and other odd treasures, stacks them up from floor to ceiling. She’s a shut-in, a recluse, and a crazy old bat who never takes visitors.

Or so Teddy’s been told.

When she arrives for a weekend visit, Teddy finds that Grandma Rose and her little old house are hiding even more mystery just beneath the surface.

Link to story: https://www.wattpad.com/story/177347204-grandma's-house

Payment: Done! :slight_smile:


#12

Read and commented :slight_smile: Thank you for taking the time to read mine :slight_smile:


#13

No problem!


#14

sorry forgot to change your status to completed can’t wait to read more of your chapters I am a huge comic fan and your story seems interesting to read


#15

Username: @Nina_Amari
Genre: Teen Fiction
Blurb: When Shaw Stones overhears a conversation not meant for her ears, she decides to use the information to her advantage because apparently, juggling school bake sales and college applications aren’t enough for the cheerleading captain.

Shaw slowly starts to realize that she’s taking on a lot more than she can bargain for, especially when it comes to Axel Taverns. He’s manipulative, rude and downright untrustworthy. He’s got more skeletons in his closet than the Winchester Brothers and he gets on Shaw’s nerves more than she’d like to admit. Soon, the two form an unlikely friendship but when one of her classmates goes missing and all leads points right back to Axel Taverns as the culprit, Shaw suddenly finds herself caught in the middle of a scandal bigger than she could’ve ever imagined.

This is a story about taking risks, about trusting your instincts and about finding love in the most unlikely places. It always happens when we’re not looking for it. So, get ready for one rollercoaster ride you’ll never forget.
Link to story: https://www.wattpad.com/story/43235800-dangerous-ties
Payment: Not completed but will complete now


#16

Username: Kumoma
Genre: Romance
Blurb: A floating city that once stood as a testament to human ingenuity has become home to every imaginable manifestation of desire, seemingly with only one exception. One searches for it without looking while another searches for it without realizing. They will find each other in a city of a million lights, each seeing the other shining more brightly than all others combined.
Link to story: https://www.wattpad.com/story/179684219-evening-star
Payment: Incomplete (to be started in the next several hours)


#17

Update: Payment complete.


#18

Username: Writerthoughtss
Genre: Teen fiction
Blurb: Kai Haywood never thought anything of being adopted by a white family. What was the problem ? She had a stable home with two siblings and parents that loved her but that wasn’t the way Aaliyah Jackson saw it, in fact everything changed when Kai met Aaliyah. Kai soon realized she had no clue who she really was.
Link to story: https://www.wattpad.com/637431408-ivory-black-01
Payment: (if complete or not) Completed


#19

Hi!

I’m just writing this message to let you know I’ve moved your post to the #story-services:critiques-and-feedback Category rather than just the #story-services Category! All it does it make it so your post is easier to find for users who don’t just click on the over all group and search per category instead.

Thanks,
PurelyAliyah :purelyaliyah:
Community Ambassador.


#20

thank you so much!


#21

Done :heart: