Hi! I’m starting this thread as I’d really like to get some feedback on my work, The Prince’s Guard, but I’m happy to do the same for you in exchange!
Due to time, I cant read more than 6 chapters of your story unless I’m absolutely hooked, but promise to comment where I see fit.
Please post the links to your stories below and the amount of chapters (up to 6) that you’d like me to read.
Description: 'They began to circle each other. Her clothes clinging to her sweat-clad figure as she danced tauntingly around him, simultaneously staying flawlessly composed. Despite her disadvantages, she watched for his every move - analysing his habits, strengths and weaknesses - and, metaphorical claws unsheathed, waited for her chance to pounce. ’
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Lucinda Beaumont was the renown daughter of the great Lord and Lady Beaumont of Sheridan. Her reputation of being astoundingly beautiful, kind, and enchanting, made her one of the most famous girls in the land; but underneath the elegance she was a well-trained fighter, and a strong young woman that was underestimated greatly.
Then there was the Prince.
Alexander Blackburn was the feared son of the tyrant King Marcel and the elegant Queen Camille. He was said to be almost as cruel as his father, and ruthless to those who crossed him. But according to legend, if you impressed him enough you might be able to gain his respect.