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#1

Hi everyone!
I got an idea.
I have given up on my story sooo hahaha. Whatever.
I have started to do reviews on storys. Send a message if you want me t review one of your storys!
/ Officer Duck :smiley:


#3

Gotcha :wink:


#4

https://www.wattpad.com/myworks/169357862-no-tears-left-to-cry
hope you like it!!


#5

Title: Handwritten Poems
Author: @TockAC
Genre: Poetry
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/164997855-handwritten-poems


#7

Title- What’s left of me
Genre-Romance
please let me know what you think by privet messaging me.


#8

Hey! If you want, could you review my story Thankful to Life’s Many Blessings? Currently, it’s posted on @leighyeann. If you want, you can PM that account on Wattpad.


#9

I would love if you took a look at my fantasy novel :slight_smile:
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/162740533-grounding-the-storm
Genre: Fantasy
Author: @leannamattos
I hope you like it!


#10

Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/168907190-despondent
Title: Despondent
Genre: Romance/teen fiction
Please have a look if you’d like


#11

If you’re comfortable with an emotional account of a severely abusive relationship between a manipulative father and his mentally ill daughter and the prevalence of cyclical sexual abuse between multiple generations in a family, then I’d love to have you tell me how you think I’m doing with this bit of horror I’m working on.

Name Of Story: Closing the Distance

Genre: Dark Psychological Horror/Thriller

Chapters: 6 (92 completed, have not posted to this specific site yet)

Ongoing /completed: Ongoing

Link to story: https://www.wattpad.com/story/168878732-closing-the-distance


#12

Name: Airborn

Genre: Fantasy, Adventure, Romance

Summary: Deep within the Earths forgotten past, in a dimension different from ours, lies a story of the Airborn. Airborn are the winged people that ruled the skies. They once lived in harmony with the humans but were sent into hiding far over the sea of sand where no one dared to travel. Centuries later generations have passed for both the humans and the Airborn. Both of them considers the other a myth. Beings that never existed. What happens when a prophecy causes their two worlds to meet again?

link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/146037178-airborn

Thank you for the opportunity!


#13

Also, why did you give up on your story?


#14

Title: Into the Underwood

Genre: Dark Fantasy

Summary: Sylvia, the daughter of a London dressmaker, has always wanted to leave the city for the place where all her mother’s fairytales take place. But after she is sent away to Dartmoor to escape the Blitz, she finds herself trapped in a terrifying fairytale of her own when she is abducted by The Alder King: the ruthless leader of the Wild Hunt. Insisting that her family owes him a great debt, Sylvia is forced into servitude within the castle at the heart of the Underwood. There she must use her skills as a seamstress to navigate this strange world of spirits and, one day, earn back her freedom. But when she meets the King’s beautiful, red-haired gamekeeper, her needlework suddenly begins taking on a life of its own. If the King discovers these new “talents” of hers, will he ever want to let her go?

Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/166914741-into-the-underwood


#15

Tell us why you gave up on your story. Maybe you’re just stuck. Sometimes it helps to talk it out with other people.


#16

TITLE: LEGEND OF D.A.R.K.E.S.S.

GENRE: Teen Fiction

SUMMARY:

“It is the age of the apocalypse and the beginning of the end. There lived a boy who became the 5 powers. Afraid of what he had become, unknown to the mysteries of the world around him. He didn’t know what awaited him at that dawn of that time, whether he would become a devil or perhaps a God. But, sometimes there are mysteries that can’t wait for no one, and only in the shadows can he be sure to find the answers he was always searching for.”

“His name was Ray Tristani, he was 16 and on his 17th birthday he never thought that he would be taken from his new home. Taken by strangers and driven afraid, alone, in the night, in the dark.”

LINK: Read here and thank you :slight_smile:


#17

Title: Soul For Hire

Blurb: Eve has died.
But, that’s not the worst part.

After being shot in the head by a gunman at a bar on 42nd street, Eve wakes up to her dead life. Her reaper won’t let her cross over and she’s having the darnedest time making friends. Just when she’s about to tip over the lonely scale, she hears a voice down an alley outside of Fenway Park.

Link: https://www.wattpad.com/384558626-soul-for-hire-•••


#18

Title: When Time Runs Out
Genre: Teen Fiction/ Romance
Blurb:
One day the clock runs down and you’re left wondering where all that time was wasted. Sometimes you wonder if you did enough; if you lived enough; if you have the proof to show that you made your time worthwhile.

Emma Roland has spent every moment of her life living to the fullest. The clothes she wear, the food she eats, and the people she spends her time with are all indications of the way she lived. But there comes a moment when you’re forced to stop and take a breath. Not everything is always so good and so fun; not every moment of your life will have a happy ending. And when Emma is forced into the darkest moment of her life, she fears that nothing will be able to save her.

Except maybe him.
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/169281188-when-time-runs-out

:grinning: Thank you and I hope you enjoy. I look forward to hearing your feedback :slight_smile:


#19

title: The Heist
Genre: Romance
hope you like it
https://www.wattpad.com/story/168946704-the-heist


#20

Title: The Secret of the Waves
Genre: Fantasy/teenfic
Blurb:
Popular, pretty, and smart, Pearl’s life has been a breeze. That is, until she takes a shower and finds a mermaid tail…
Thank you!
Wattpad won’t let me put a link in for some reason so I can’t paste the link here, but I hope you enjoy!


#21

Hi everyone!
Im going to read every story. I promise!
Some people ask why i have given up on my story, the answer is that i’m stuck on a chapter but i have an idea!
Thanks for sharing your storys!


#22

Me do mine…its not a book…its an radio book