Reviews!

feedback

#23

Title
Katherine: His Love, Her Revenge
Genre: Romance/Thriller/Mystery/Drama

The story of a young man captivated by the beauty of Katherine who is used to the attention…then why was this time different?

A story filled with characters you’ll hate to love and love to hate.
A romance novel where each chapter comes with a surprise only to confuse you more. Clues to unveil secrets can be found it if you know how to join the dots.


#24

Genre: Fantasy
Title: Adventures of Prince Vajendra.
Progress: WIP
Chapter: 13
Summary: Meet Prince Vajendra, aka the so-called spiritual Rishi of the continent of Vishaputra, a flat earth. He’s a man not interested in saving the world, but having his own adventures. A man that can talk with Gods, deal with flying airships, throw exploding bombs into the air. He must retrieve the powers that an evil Pharoah, named Nahakasha has taken from him. This story goes into a series of episodic sub-plots more than an overarching story.

Link:https://www.wattpad.com/story/169477580-the-adventures-of-prince-vajendra


#25

Kitty Comfort
https://www.wattpad.com/story/161626675-kitty-comfort

Summary:(y/n) is convinced by her friend to go get pets together, only they weren’t just getting pets but hybrids. (y/n) finds out that going from living alone to living with a selective hybrid is something that she had never expected that she go through…and maybe even like it.


#26

It would be awesome if you wanted to check out either of my stories:

Dreams of Scale and Bone

[ Fantasy // Mystery // Ongoing ]
"Drika should have been used to that stillness, that waxy pale skin, but Guus Saito wasn't like the cadavers she dissected in class. Though his wrist was cold, he had a faint pulse."

College student Drika Van Meer investigates a boy’s inexplicable illness. With help from her arranged date, she uncovers a conspiracy involving the Holy Imperial College, the Prince of Orange, and a mysterious force with a taste for blood.


Depths

[ Sci-Fi // Short Story // Complete ]
"Down here, life was scarce, and the creatures outside her bunker grew larger, lonelier, and hungrier."

A girl faces the darkness of isolation and the monster that’s come to visit.
14-year-old Maya lives in a bunker at the bottom of the ocean. Even the scientists recording her every move can’t predict she won’t be alone for long.


#27

All the Lights are On
https://www.wattpad.com/story/166316894-all-the-lights-are-on

Thank you!


#28

Hi!

I’d appreciate a review:

Sunderbans Stories (8 chapters - drafts, one is slightly fantasy, one SciFi, the rest are… normal).

Backstory to Sunderbans:K (SciFi Fantasy)

story/122068038-sunderbans-stories

Merovech

Thanks!

(says I can’t put more than 5 links in here when there’s only one…)


#29

I’d love it if you could look at my teen fiction.
Title: the girl from swan lake
genre: teen fiction
link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/153158425-the-girl-from-swan-lake

thank you in advance:)


#30

I have a Sci-Fi YA.
Title: The Ugly Darkling
Genre: Science Fiction
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/168472060-the-ugly-darkling

This may sound flat as the others before said it, but thank you. From the bottom of my sixteen year old heart, I’ll utterly appreciate if you critique my work, and show me a better way to come through it.


#31

Oh, I’d be honored! :bluehearts:

Name: Half-Demon’s revenge

Genre: Dark fantasy, YA

Summary: The land of Radenor is in need of salvation: the royal family and court are corrupt to their very core and full of vipers and backstabbers, the church is malevolent, people are starving, death has become a frequent guest of the mendicant people.

The story is on my profile!


#32

Title: Adventures of Prince Vajendra

Genre: Fantasy

Blurb:
Meet Prince Vajendra, aka the so-called spiritual Rishi of the continent of Vishaputra, a flat earth. He’s a man not interested in saving the world, but having his own adventures. A man that can talk with Gods, deal with flying airships, throw exploding bombs into the air. He must retrieve the powers that an evil Pharoah, named Nahakasha has taken from him. This story goes into a series of episodic sub-plots more than an overarching story.

Which chapter: 1 for start, see how you like it!

**Link:**https://www.wattpad.com/story/169477580-the-adventures-of-prince-vajendra

In terms:

Give your honest reaction, did it pull you, do put in reactions, like what you comment I mean do everything you would. Give your honest opinion


#33

Here’s the link to my one: The Seer

Thank you so much ^^


#34

My story is high fantasy so only read if you like that genre please… (tell me if you’re not going to)
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/167228168-the-dance-of-the-marquis
I hope you can review my story, I would love it if you could answer a few questions:
Is world interesting?
Does my world make sense?
Is there something in my world that needed fleshing out? AKA you felt that the part of the world was required for the story and it wasn’t explained well enough
Are my characters interesting?
Are my characters realistic?
Do you feel that you know/understand my character?
Does my plot make sense?
Is the plot interesting?
Would you read the sequel?

Sorry if this is too much


#35

Would love a review https://www.wattpad.com/myworks/167321448-long-gone

If you really enjoy it the whole thing is available on amazon ( I could lend you a free copy), just really looking for reviews, thank you!


#36

I have an epic fantasy novel here on Wattpad. I’m almost finished uploading it. 70 parts are currently uploaded.

A Prince’s Errand
https://www.wattpad.com/story/146659604-a-prince’s-errand

Thanks!


#37

If you like poetry I would love for you to check out my book
Poetry by the One and Only Wonko Me
https://www.wattpad.com/635454419-poetry-by-the-one-and-only-wonko-me-hi-hello-or
you can just pick and choose a couple don´t worry about reading the whole thing
thankyou!


#38

Wow it really doesn’t take long for these threads to fill up, does it?

I’ve just recently started uploading my Nano projected Cursed Gardens and would love for you to consider it <3

https://www.wattpad.com/story/166994398-cursed-gardens


#40

Title: When I Sleep…I Dream of Mars
Author: @bubblenikki
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/161172860-when-i-sleep-i-dream-of-mars

Thanks so much in advance :), I hope you enjoy it!