This is a sort of challenge or something…
I want you to try to think like a reader and criticize your book like a reader might at the end. Not like an editor. A reader.
I’ll set the example here:
Oh my god, this book was so slow and MC is so stupid. She doesn’t know anything about men. You wasted so much time having characters talk to each other and nothing ever happens. We didn’t even get to see anymore of the best characters like Atticus and Sumeia. Why does MC not like the guy that she should? And wtf was that ending? Do they get back home or what?
Basically the idea of this challenge is to get us to find the biggest glaring flaws in our own work and see if we might want to make changes to them.