Hey there Wattpad!
I currently have a new story I’m working on titled One Night. I would LOVE some feedback on the first 10 chapters that I currently have published.
My story is romance and any sub-genre is fine as long as it is a romance story
How it works We can do 5 at a time You read 5 of mine, I’ll read 5 of yours Please fill out the form below and I will reply with ACCEPTED. Please be sure to comment throughout the chapters so I know that you read it . I will do the same for you Once you have finished the 5 chapters, please PM me to let me know. I will form a queue once I get multiple requests.
Please DM me and respond here when finished!
There is a link to my story below the form
Anything you’d like me to focus on?
Current Queue to Begin on 1/13 (I will be getting started on these Monday 1/13. Please be aware that I also work and am a student. I also have a critique thread currently. I will be getting to all of these, I promise. @HeraHarker and @ClauMer79 are at the top of the list because they were first to complete the R4R but got lost from my thread. Thank you! Stay nerdy <3)
A Forbidden Romance Novel
Harper Anne Lewis didn’t think an arranged marriage would be something she needed to worry about. But, when her parents wanted to merge businesses with Ryan Hale’s parents, she didn’t have much of a choice.
Harper and Ryan are civil with each other and get along okay; however, they couldn’t be more different in the bedroom. They agree to a private semi-open relationship to fulfill their needs; and there are three simple rules: don’t sleep with someone if they know the family, NEVER sleep the same person twice, and DO NOT catch feelings .
When Harper feels unhappy with her situation, she finds herself at a bar and confides in the tall, dark, and handsome British man, named Jackson Reese, sitting next to her. A connection is made and the two get lost in what was meant to be only one night of passion.
But, when Harper goes to a family event the next day, Ryan introduces her to his estranged half-brother. Jackson Reese. Even though they pretend not to know each other, it’s not long before they give in to their desires and break every rule; risking it all.
Unable to resist the deep connection they share for each other, they head down a dangerous road. How long will they be able to keep up this illicit affair without being caught? Or worse…fall in love?
Ranked #2 in Sinned!