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#1

I can critique your first chapter in any way you want- grammar, character development, flow… I’ve got an eagle eye for spelling and grammar mistakes. I’ll be thorough unless you simply want feedback.

Payment:
Free, for one chapter (but I’d still appreciate you checking out my book!)
I will critique your first 3 chapters or any specific chapters if you add my book, Otherkind, to your reading list, or leave a comment on my first chapter.
I’ll also follow you for free :smile:


#2

Hey! I’m really interested in this, could you possibly critique the first three chapters of my book Zeitgeist? https://www.wattpad.com/story/147940108-zeitgeist


#3

Sure! I can do it right now. I’ll message you with my critiques for each chapter. You can check my book whenever you can. It’s only got 5 chapters so far but you don’t have to read all of them if you don’t like the book.


#4

Alright! So the critique will be sent through PM right?


#5

yes


#6

Would you be willing to read the first chapter of my story The Alpha’s Flame? I’m confident in my grammar, but more feedback is always welcome


#7

Sure! I should be able to do it by tomorrow.


#8

Take your time :slight_smile:


#9

Hi! If it’s okay with you, can you check out our BTS FF “Slowly and Painfully”? Even a comment will make us really happy! We’re still new here so we’re so sorry to disturb (;m;

Thank you for your time!

https://www.wattpad.com/story/171401145-slowly-and-painfully-bts-ff


#10

Don’t worry about disturbing! I don’t know too much about BTS but I can do my best to provide some feedback on grammar and flow! I’ll do it as soon as I can!


#11

Thank you so much! I will read and comment about your stories as well.


#12

Thank you!


#13

Sure, I’ll read and comment on your story. As well.

Here is my humble tribute, to the world. :stuck_out_tongue:


#14

Could You do mine?
It’s called Lost Without You
Link- https://www.wattpad.com/story/164696389-lost-without-you


#15

Hello! Is it alright if the first chapter is on Google Docs? If so, I’ll send the link via PM. Also, if you want access to comment, just tell me.


#16

I understand you might be busy as you have many chapters to get through, could you reply to me when you are ready to give mine a look? Id much appreciate it.


#17

I’d love you to check mine out, sorry about bombarding you lol

https://www.wattpad.com/story/174877087-regicide


#18

I would really appreciate it if u read my story called “The Lost Teen” and critique it :)) If u have the time could u tell me if i should do a sequel or should i not… I’ll surely check your book out!


#19

Hello! It would mean so much to me if you could take a bit of your time to read my book, it’s called Spite and it is a romantic comedy that I have been writing, please do drop by and read!


#20

Hello! I’d really love to know what you think of my first chapter :slight_smile:. I’d really like some feedback on how the plot and characters are. It’s preceded by a prologue.
Link- https://www.wattpad.com/story/174132370-the-world-changerhttps://www.wattpad.com/story/174132370-the-world-changer