Shadow's Read and Critique (CLOSED for catch up)



Hi! Would love your feedback on mine!

Title: Loving Ivy’s Colorful Mind
Genre: Teen Fiction, Romance, Mental.Health

Thanks in advance! Hope.ypeu enjoy it!


Already followed you. :):smile:


Great, though this may take a little time. I’m still checking the first ones before you.


No worries. No rush. :slight_smile: thank you!


Done :slight_smile:


Done :slight_smile: And I would like to say, that I really love your cover too:)


title: All You Need is Faith, Trust, and a Little Bit of Poetry
Genre: Poetry (love/depression)
link: sorry wattpad isn’t really allowing me to post the link ;p, but i hope you can give it a read!


Of course. I’ll check it out.


Title: Rhythm In Wynter
Genre:Gay Horror Romance
It’s paranormal, not Vampire, my characters are alive, they are also Animal, and it’s a ghost story of sorts. I’d appreciate your feedback and thanks in advance.
Let me know if it’s not something you’re interested in. I’ve followed you and I’m going to check out your work. :slight_smile:


No, it’s fine.


Hello! I only have a few chapters of my story up currently, but if I follow you would you be willing to continue reading as I post more until I hit 5? If not I can come back once I get to 5. Here’s the blurb below, please let me know if you’re interested!

Title: The Fall of Mangiatorvi

Genre: Young Adult, Fantasy

Blurb: Gemma spent the majority of her life feeling like an outcast, hiding her gifts from those around her. Then in a whirlwind of violence and heartbreak, she is recruited to Mangiatorvi University for the Gifted in a Magical Realm. She falls under the mentorship of both the crown prince and the most gifted fighter in the realm. They earn her trust and she earns their loyalty, but can she chance her heart again? Tensions are rising in the government as the country is on the brink of both civil war and war with the bordering state. Gemma struggles to navigate a new world, searching for normalcy amongst friendships, romance, and politics.



I got a little confuse. What do you mean ‘until I hit 5’?


I only have 3 chapters right now, so I was wondering if you’d be willing to read those 3 and then read the next 2 after I post them. if that’s too confusing or taxing to remember I can always submit another request after all 5 chapters are published


Of course. Just remind me. I always forget.


Done. Thank you for coming! Lol, what is this? Restaurant?


Perfect! I followed you :slight_smile:


Thank you




Done, thanks.


For those I haven’t check yet, I will read yours tomorrow. I ended at @lostinmywriting. I need sleep. Goodnight. :slight_smile: