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#41

Thanks so much I am glad you liked it x


#42

You’re welcome.


#43

Hi! If you are interested, here is my story link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/163937549-bat-club

I will be more than happy to read some of your work as well


#44

I would love feedback on my story; it’s an Epic Fantasy story (if you enjoy reading it, feel free to keep on reading!)
Title: The Legend of the Moonflower Princess
Genre: Fantasy, Epic Fantasy, High Fantasy
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/659085416-the-legend-of-the-moonflower-princess-where-the


#45

Title: The Lies That We Tell
Genre: Romance
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/150789433-the-lies-that-we-tell

This is my newest story that only has ten published chapters and I would love to get feedback early enough to know what I should fix in it. If you want to read a completed story, here’s a link to my first completed book The Truths That We Hide https://www.wattpad.com/story/105277693-the-truths-that-we-hide

(sorry for promoting it, hope you won’t deny my book because of that oops) thank you!


#46

Hi, dunno what genre you are into but I hope you’ll give my story a read. And I really hope you’ll like it. Cheers!!:blush::kissing_heart:

Title: Against All Odds
Genre: contemporary romance with a bit of drama
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/119764716-against-all-odds


#47

Thanks so much xx


#48

Title: The Four Chimes
Genre: Fantasy
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/173449590-the-four-chimes


#49

Yo! Got a book for ya!

Title: BURNED
Genre: Dark Humor
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/174746904-burned

HOPE YOU LIKE IT!


#50

If you’re willing, I would love if you could look over my book :blush::blush:

Title: Beauty is Terror
Genre: Fantasy/ Romance
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/155218071-beauty-is-terror


#51

Title: The Meaning of Love

Genre: Teen Fiction

Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/174706687-the-meaning-of-love


#52

Awesome offer here! Let me know if I’m accepted :slight_smile:

Title: The Blood of Queens
Genre: Urban Fantasy
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/170452706-the-blood-of-queens

Thank you very much!


#53

Title: The Shift
Genre: Post Apoc/ scifi
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/myworks/164713250-the-shift


#54

Title: The Game
Genre: Fantasy
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/172790216-the-game
Summary: In a place called The Dust Clan a girl named Claire Frost, life is forever changed when her name is entered in The Calling. Now it is up to her to try and keep herself and her family alive. Claire will have to make some of the hardest decisions in her life if she wants to live. She will soon learn how far one person is willing to go to survive.
PSA: It is mature only for the profanity. It does get a little bloody at times so beware!!!


#55

Title: The Iron Ring
Genre: Fan fiction (How to train your dragon)
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/171644655-the-iron-ring
Thank you^_^


#56

I only have three chapters so far.

Title: Dean and Sam Meet The Real Azazel
Genre: Fan fiction (Supernatural)
Link: Dean and Sam Meet The Real Azazel

Thanks a lot.


#57

Payment done :slight_smile:


#58

That would be great. I would like to have your feedback, too.


#59

Done :slight_smile:


#60

Done. Your poems are amazing. :slight_smile: