Shadow's Read and Critique (CLOSED for catch up)

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#82

HAHA, right.


#83

Great, so what do you think? Anything that you particularly liked/ disliked? I know you mentioned long paragraphs and I agree, some are too long and will be broken into shorter ones. I really hope you liked it, though. Thanks for reading, I appreciate it. Cheers! :slight_smile::blush:


#84

I really have no problem with the way you write. For me, it was going well. The flow of the story is smooth. Also, I liked it that you show Blake’s point-of-view. It helped me understand his inner self that he’s trying to hide. The typical boss :slight_smile: Although, I’ve read stories quite similar to this in the past, you made the main characters somehow unique in their own way.


#85

Oh, thank you! You’ve just made my day!!! :grin::blush:


#86

take your time please :blush:


#87

payment completed


#88

Title: Beauty Is In The Clouds
Genre: Mystery/Thriller
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/165418611-beauty-is-in-the-clouds-nanowrimo-2018


#89

Just Survive
Science Fiction
https://www.wattpad.com/story/149799241-just-survive


#90

Title: Really Truly, Reese
Genre: Teen Fiction
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/176256069-really-truly-reese


#91

Thank you so very much. <3


#92

Title: the end of me in a diary
Genre: Teen fiction
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/164213191-the-end-of-me-in-a-diary

I’m gonna follow you, whenever you’ve got time i would appreciate it


#93

Title: The Record Shop Thief Wears a Jean Jacket
Genre: Teen Fiction
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/173210511-the-record-shop-thief-wears-a-jean-jacket


#94

Title: Temptation
Genre: Paranormal
Link:https://www.wattpad.com/story/175619855-temptation-the-eden-waters-series-book-one

I’m going to go follow you now! :slight_smile:


#95

Done :slight_smile:


#96

Done:)


#97

Done:)


#98

done :slight_smile:


#99

Done :slight_smile: Sorry. It took much longer.


#100

Finished.


#101

No problem, I appreciate it!