Shadow's Read and Critique (CLOSED for catch up)



Hi. I am back! Whatever your concerns are about this thread, please approach nicely :slight_smile: thanks. Have a good day!


It would be great if you could read my story and give some feedback.
Title:Crimson Love
Genre:Mystery, General fiction




Title: Mirror Me (Mirror Me Series Book 1)
Genre: YA Fantasy Romance
You can read any length of it you desire since I know it’s complete at over 40 chapters. Hope you enjoy.


Title: The Girl That Fell From The Sky
Genre: Fantasy/mystery/ humor/ more
thank you for your time :smile:




Accepted :slight_smile:


Title: Saving Callum
Genre: Murder-Mystery


payment done :grin:



I’ve had this work posted for a while and i need a second opinion on whether it’s good or not. Pretty much everything: characterisation, grammar where it’s due, flow. Everything really. I’ve already followed you.

Title: The X-Event
Genre: Fanfiction (Undertone of light romance)

I understand if you don’t accept fanfictions
It only has about 7 chapters, but they’re long, very long…


Mystery! I’m looking forward to this :slight_smile:


Thank you so much for giving it a chance! :grin:


I’m working on your story now. Sorry for the late response. Just busy in school.


Title: Is Magic a Superpower?
Genre: fantasy/ superhero


I’d love it if you checked out my story :grin: I have 7 parts out so far, but more coming soon.

Title: From Riches to Rags
Genre: Adventure

I’ll go give ya a follow right now!


Read and commented :slight_smile:




Welcome, hun.


Hi. I’m sorry for not responding early. This is just to remind you that I am now adding your book to my list. The first one before you has a book which has 45 chapters, I think, and I am trying to read as much as I can with my tight schedule. Hope you understand.


What a kind offer @MystiqueShadow378! I’d love it if you could check out my new story “All” :slight_smile: x

Title: All
Genre: Romance