Shadow's Read and Critique (CLOSED for catch up)

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#102

Hi. I am back! Whatever your concerns are about this thread, please approach nicely :slight_smile: thanks. Have a good day!


#103

It would be great if you could read my story and give some feedback.
Title:Crimson Love
Genre:Mystery, General fiction
Link:https://www.wattpad.com/story/165230958-crimson-love


#104

Accepted!


#105

Title: Mirror Me (Mirror Me Series Book 1)
Genre: YA Fantasy Romance
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/161837339-mirror-me-mirror-me-series-book-1-✓
You can read any length of it you desire since I know it’s complete at over 40 chapters. Hope you enjoy.


#106

Title: The Girl That Fell From The Sky
Genre: Fantasy/mystery/ humor/ more
Link:https://www.wattpad.com/684462685-the-girl-that-fell-from-the-sky-black-bird-and-a
thank you for your time :smile:


#107

Accepted!


#108

Accepted :slight_smile:


#109

Title: Saving Callum
Genre: Murder-Mystery
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/176379862-saving-callum


#110

payment done :grin:


#111

Hi

I’ve had this work posted for a while and i need a second opinion on whether it’s good or not. Pretty much everything: characterisation, grammar where it’s due, flow. Everything really. I’ve already followed you.

Title: The X-Event
Genre: Fanfiction (Undertone of light romance)
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/162087135-the-x-event-undertale-series

I understand if you don’t accept fanfictions
It only has about 7 chapters, but they’re long, very long…


#112

Mystery! I’m looking forward to this :slight_smile:


#113

Thank you so much for giving it a chance! :grin:


#114

I’m working on your story now. Sorry for the late response. Just busy in school.


#115

Title: Is Magic a Superpower?
Genre: fantasy/ superhero
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/86646941-is-magic-a-superpower


#116

I’d love it if you checked out my story :grin: I have 7 parts out so far, but more coming soon.

Title: From Riches to Rags
Genre: Adventure
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/176381523-from-riches-to-rags

I’ll go give ya a follow right now!


#117

Read and commented :slight_smile:


#118

Thanks!


#119

Welcome, hun.


#120

Hi. I’m sorry for not responding early. This is just to remind you that I am now adding your book to my list. The first one before you has a book which has 45 chapters, I think, and I am trying to read as much as I can with my tight schedule. Hope you understand.


#121

What a kind offer @MystiqueShadow378! I’d love it if you could check out my new story “All” :slight_smile: x

Title: All
Genre: Romance
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/173304181-all