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#122

Accepted. Though this may really take time. I’m still down on the third one of the queue.


#123

Take your time its no race :smiley:


#124

Take a look at my story! I’m sure you’ll like it:)

Title: Elysia: The Wasteworld
Genre: Adventure/Dystopia/Fantasy/Action/LGBT
Blurb: Due to the War that devastated the globe, all governments have lost their power and the systems that hold the world together are falling apart. The last standing paradise city on Earth-Elysia-is secluded and allowed to very few qualified individuals. Would Erik, a rather reckless blond boy with a Cadillac and Jessica, who grew up to be a ruthless, independent woman, be able to team up and reach Elysia in search of freedom and lasting bliss?

Contains slight mature content.

Link: https://www.wattpad.com/695609957-elysia-the-wasteworld-the-car-thief

Please read the first three chapters, and if you’re intrigued, check more out!


#125

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https://www.wattpad.com/story/177136414-ratna-and-the-nine-mystical-gems


#126

Done :slight_smile: Thanks for visiting this thread XD


#127

would you be willing to read poetry? if so…
Title: Enlighten Me
Genre: Poetry
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/178929039-enlighten-me

Thanks!


#128

Accepted :slight_smile:


#129

Accepted XD


#130

Of course. That’s fine. Just wait for further notice :slight_smile:


#131

Title: Fragmented
Genre: Short story/mystery
Link:https://www.wattpad.com/story/179745486-fragmented
Thank you very much. I have only one chapter though


#132

Accepted :slight_smile:


#133

Thank you


#134

thank u


#135

Hi. Good day. It’s been a long time and it has been a rough month for me. So, I’m sorry for not reading your works immediately. I’ll try to find time. Thanks for understanding.


#136

Title: Black Rose
Genre: Romance
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/706483222-black-rose-prologue

A really short PROLOGUE is all I have out at the moment.


#137

Title: Ivory Black
Genre: Teen Fiction
Link to story: https://www.wattpad.com/637431408-ivory-black-01


#138

Title- Ex- Future Queen of Salovia
Genre- Teen Fiction/ Young Adult
Link- https://www.wattpad.com/story/181328844-ex-future-queen-of-salovia

I hoe you enjoy it!


#139

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#140

Here you go


#141

New batch. Noted. Thanks