Shadow's Read and Critique (CLOSED for catch up)



Accepted. Though this may really take time. I’m still down on the third one of the queue.


Take your time its no race :smiley:


Take a look at my story! I’m sure you’ll like it:)

Title: Elysia: The Wasteworld
Genre: Adventure/Dystopia/Fantasy/Action/LGBT
Blurb: Due to the War that devastated the globe, all governments have lost their power and the systems that hold the world together are falling apart. The last standing paradise city on Earth-Elysia-is secluded and allowed to very few qualified individuals. Would Erik, a rather reckless blond boy with a Cadillac and Jessica, who grew up to be a ruthless, independent woman, be able to team up and reach Elysia in search of freedom and lasting bliss?

Contains slight mature content.


Please read the first three chapters, and if you’re intrigued, check more out!




Done :slight_smile: Thanks for visiting this thread XD


would you be willing to read poetry? if so…
Title: Enlighten Me
Genre: Poetry



Accepted :slight_smile:


Accepted XD


Of course. That’s fine. Just wait for further notice :slight_smile:


Title: Fragmented
Genre: Short story/mystery
Thank you very much. I have only one chapter though


Accepted :slight_smile:


Thank you


thank u


Hi. Good day. It’s been a long time and it has been a rough month for me. So, I’m sorry for not reading your works immediately. I’ll try to find time. Thanks for understanding.


Title: Black Rose
Genre: Romance

A really short PROLOGUE is all I have out at the moment.


Title: Ivory Black
Genre: Teen Fiction
Link to story:


Title- Ex- Future Queen of Salovia
Genre- Teen Fiction/ Young Adult

I hoe you enjoy it!


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Here you go


New batch. Noted. Thanks