Share a paragraph or two from your fantasy book and see what other people have to say about it! Rate each post on a scale of 1-10, 1 being it wasn’t the best (explain why, let them know what they could do to improve) and 10 being amazing (explain why you thought it was great)!
- Don’t link your story.
- Don’t ask others to read your book.
- Be kind.
- Have fun!
Here’s mine from The Wolf and The Crow:
Sylas breathed deeply, his gaze focused on the straw made target, which took the shape of a man. His body buzzed, like the warmth one felt when drinking ale, fueling him. It coursed through him in a steady rhythm, and reminded him of soothing waves of the lakes.
There was a tingling in his fingertips, akin to the prickle of a limb falling asleep, that travelled its way up his hands and to his arms. A flicker of blue-white lightning danced across his fingers, before morphing into a sphere in the palm of his hand. It sizzled and screeched as he shot it towards the target.