I haven’t done this in ages
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Your stuff is on my reading list now. Thanks for sharing it on here! Also, the covers are amazing!!
okay…“There’s blood on the crown. Why not splash a little on the walls too?”…genius
I just decided to read the book description and now I’m super excited. this is a ridiculously good line. Can’t wait to read more.
No qualms there. I wouldn’t want feedback from someone who isn’t interested in it since it would likely bleed into their critiques. Whatever you notice would be helpful; especially, blatant grammatical errors and tangles. However, if you do find yourself interested in it, I would like to know what’s working and what’s not working in the story mechanics.
I.e. am I giving life to my characters, or are they too rigid; are you able to clearly see the visuals I’m describing, or are there any plot holes/details that break the story?
I feel the same.
Okay, I see what you’re hoping for, that makes it easier for me when I comment. I promise I will do my best to treat it with respect.
talk soon!
Caroline.
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Gotta promote the sample more.