Creating this topic, because I haven’t seen those in a while that don’t already have 500 replies.
- Post the first paragraph (or two if they’re short) of your story.
- Add the title of your story
- Reply to the last person, giving feedback about their paragraph. Be honest, but nice. Remember many of us are still starting out!
- Do not post the link to your story! This is only for some feedback, and to improve your writing. (If you are genuinely interested, and want to read somebody’s book, look at their Wattpad profile).
I’ll try to reply to as much as I can!
Here’s mine (from the prologue):
Share the Night
Pain. Pain doesn’t perish like people make you believe. It doesn’t fade at night. It doesn’t hurt less the day after. It grows with the person.
You might forget a few weeks later when standing in front of a mirror. You may try to make things better, be positive, and feel thankful for your life. But, the thoughts always come back. The pain always comes back. It will never disappear from your heart.