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#84

Title: When Time Runs Out

Author: liveandbedaring_07

Genre: Teen Fiction/Romance

Short Summary:
One day the clock runs down and you’re left wondering where all that time was wasted. Sometimes you wonder if you did enough; if you lived enough; if you have the proof to show that you made your time worthwhile.

Emma Roland has spent every moment of her life living to the fullest. The clothes she wear, the food she eats, and the people she spends her time with are all indications of the way she lived. But there comes a moment when you’re forced to stop and take a breath. Not everything is always so good and so fun; not every moment of your life will have a happy ending. And when Emma is forced into the darkest moment of her life, she fears that nothing will be able to save her.

Except maybe him.

Anything else: You can focus on whatever you think is important for my own personal improvement :slight_smile: Any specific things you can say about the overall flow of the story is great!

Password: Non-alcoholic - Iced Tea
Alcoholic - Pornstar


#85

Form:

Title: Searching For Christian

Author: T. A. McPherson

Genre: Young adult

Short Summary: Basically a girl is trying solve the 12 year old mystery of her friend’s death.

Anything else: It’s not posted but I’d be able to send you a pastebin link in pm.

Password: Wine lol


#86

@PaigeRain_stories @novelsbytia @liveandbedaring_07 Accepted please complete payment. It may take me a few days to complete the reviews, so please be patient.

@JJohnson-Pitter declined, I’m sorry.


#87

Thank you. Payment is done.


#88

When I get to yours I’ll PM you for the link. :slight_smile:


#90

I deleted my post when reading that you didn’t do fantasy hence, apologies