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Soul Critiques

Hello, I am Eden Soul and I am offering detailed critiques and general feedback. I have been writing for a decade, and have been giving review services on and off Wattpad for 5 years. I have fully edited numerous of my own books and used to work with authors as an editor as well.

Read ENTIRE post for PASSWORD or I WILL decline your request IMMEDIATELY.

I give general critiques with a focus on:

  • Grammar/spelling/punctuation
  • Tenses
  • Description
  • Characters
  • Flow
  • The β€œhook” of the first chapter
  • And my overall thoughts

You may tell me which areas you would like me to focus on more than the others, if you would like. Otherwise I will focus on all of it.

I will read the first 3 chapters. Or whatever is available, not including character pages, copyright pages or author notes. This does include prologues as a chapter.

I reserve the right to deny your request without a reason.

Please be patient. Depending on the length of your chapters, and how many users are in front of you in the queue, it may take me a few days to complete your request. Unfortunately, I work full-time and may not be as quick with my turnaround as I would like.

Please do not take what I say too hard. I may come off in my comments very harsh, but it is only because I am trying to help. I don’t intentionally try to hurt any feelings, or bring anyone down, I can just be really harsh. I do this because I believe everyone can grow as a writer, they just need guidance. I really truly am just trying to help you reach you’re full potential. So please keep that in mind if my critique seems particularly harsh.

I accept all genres except fanfiction

Payment is a follow. Please only follow after I have accepted your request. However, please complete payment in a timely manner so I can get to your request. PASSWORD Click HERE

If you have already requested from me, you can request again for a different book or a few more chapters of the same book. In the event this happens we can talk about other payment options. But please be advised that I may still decline your request even if you have requested previously.

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PLEASE ONLY USE THIS FORM

Form:

Title:

Author:

Genre:

Short Summary:

Anything else this is where you can tell me what, if anything, to focus on. :

Password:


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Author Payment Status Critique Status
PaigeRain_stories Awaiting Payment

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Author Payment Status Critique Status

#5

Reserved For No Apparent Reason... I’ll Use It Maybe..


#6

Followed!


#7

Title: Devil in Disguise

Author: @hallonn23

Genre: Romance

Short Summary: What’s a special agent for the FBI, and former army sniper to do when his long-time partner retires, his ex-girlfriend is trying to get full custody of his son, and hipsters are taking over the world? Honestly, Agent Black wouldn’t mind a break, but the government has other ideas. There’s no breaks in this murder investigation featuring a double homicide, a new female partner, and the desperate hunt for justice.

Anything else character development, voice, overall enjoyment from a readers POV, word choice, sentence structure :


#8

Title: Seventy days
Genre: short story
Description: The world is a different place. From technological advancements, social integration and peace from the war, it seems dangerous to interact with the world in its current state. But history will change that. Luri, a rich werewolf who has s traumatizing past, wants to have a quiet life while not having issues with the world. But her future would change how she sees the world. She bet her struggling medicine business to circumnavigate the globe in seventy days for twenty million dollars.
Anything else: that’s it


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Followed


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@hallonn23 declined, I’m sorry.

@sarahgrimm2018 please read post #1 in it’s entirety.


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I did read the first post thank you very much. Not to be rude or anything but I followed exactly what the post said.


#12

No, I can assure you, you did not. If you had, you would have seen 1) the password and 2)


#13

Oh ok. But I did read it just don’t understand what you mean. Now I get it.


#14

No problem, but please update your post with the password and I’ll accept. :slight_smile:


#15

That’s perfectly fine! Just because I am a curious person, may I ask why you declined? (:


#16

Although the book sounds interesting I’m a sucker for anything military related I’m not familiar enough with that particular genre (mystery/thriller/action/adventure) to be of much help. I did add it to my library, I just don’t want to do the critique and not give you a review that’s worth the wait and payment.


#17

Understandable. I was just trying to make sure it wasn’t something about the novel itself that turned you away (such as the blurb or what not.) Thanks for your feedback though and best of luck in your critiques.


#18

Title:

Author: @emliarad

Genre: Romance

Short Summary:

❝It was like a game between the two of them until the other one stopped playing❞

They were enemies in high school. Pulling pranks, calling names and embarrassing each other in front of the school were in both of their’s daily schedules. That lasted almost three years until she disappeared mysteriously in the senior year without a word and he continued living a life the way it was before meeting her.

Now, five years later both of them are busy with their lives. They haven’t seen or heard of each other since that day but the memories never disappeared. When they meet again after so long, neither of them was ready for the consequences.

Anything else: just tell me anything that comes to your mind while reading, thanks!


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Declined


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@ElmiraNight I apologize for how long it took me to critique yours, I haven’t been feeling well and I have been busier than usual in real life.