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#21

Hey, my novel is marked as Horror, but the chapter I want you to critique doesn’t have any horror in it, it’s more teen fic. Could I still request?


#22

Of course, just be sure to tell me which chapter you want me to critique.


#23

Title: Innate

Author: WriteDestiny

Genre: Horror/ Teen Fic

Short Summary: Blix had never experienced true fear until that night. She had never felt dread curdling in the pit of her stomach. She never wanted this, it was beyond even the worst of her nightmares. And yet, there she was. Blix had never needed saving, but if she wanted to survive, there was a lesson she needed to learn. Fear is a powerful thing, but then again, so is love

Anything else : I only have one chapter to critique.


#24

Accepted, please complete payment.


#25

Payment completed


#26

It’s all good! I hope you feel better!


#30

Bump


#31

Thank you in advance:smile:


#32

Accepted. :slight_smile:


#33

Thank you! I do have a question about the payment though. I already follow you so would you like me to do another form of payment? :smile:


#34

No, that isn’t necessary. I don’t have anything else to add as payment anyway :stuck_out_tongue:


#35

Okay :smile: thank you!


#36

Title: Colours

Author: Kelly Ornsby

Genre: teen/romance

Short Summary:
Noah couldn’t see. Ever since the accident life hadn’t been the same. His life lacked colour. Everywhere he looked nothing was there. Just black. The colour that his world became. Noah wanted to jump. He wanted to leap of the edge and never look back. He told himself that life without colour wasn’t a life worth living. Until he met Ember. She glowed like the revived ashes of a fire. Noah was the ashes all ember had to do was bring him back to life. Noah could see ember. Someone who thought she was invisible but to Noah she glowed like the brightest of flames among the many unlit candles. She was beautiful. Noah didn’t have to see to be able to know that. Noah and embers lives were very different. Ember lived hers to the fullest and with bursting colour, Noah lived his with no purpose and an emptiness that consumed him. But when embers light starts to die out can the boy who only see’s black help her regain her colours or will she fall into the ashes and lose her spark forever.

Anything else; Just an honest opinion please!


#37

Title: The Fault in Us
Author: Snowflakecake_
Summary:Mr. Arnaud Alamo and Isola Elm are teacher and student, pupil and mentor, lover and lover. How it happened no one knows and no one asked; instead they gossiped, spread rumors, and hid their envy.
Nothing to begrudge, Isola and Mr. Alamo now deal with the retribution placed upon them by society due to their reckless actions .
Isola labeled mentally unstable and Mr. Alamo facing rape allegations, this is the story of their love. If one could even say it was love.

Anything else would maybe focus on how the characters come off, if they’re fleshed out enough etc.


#38

Accepted. Please complete payment


#39

Declined


#40

completed !


#41

Title: Wing Girl for Prince Charming

Author: Shakespearian1

Genre: Romance/Teen Fiction/Humor/LGBTQ+

Short Summary: In 29th Century France, Lady Ella Proulx-Richelieu leaves the comfort of her stepfamily to become a lady-in-waiting for a high-maintenance countess, and eventually the wing girl for Prince Mael Charming

Anything else: Yes, this is a story in the future; however, this is not science-fiction as the story relates more to the antics (humor) and romance in the story. Also, I currently only have one chapter up.

Password: Water


#42

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#43

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