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#44

I see I am a few moments too late. Perhaps you will consider after you finish your current rotation.

Title: Youth Unsupervised

Author: @Aruko-Rukie

Genre: Romance

Short Summary: One summer night, best friends Kaito and Hiromasa save a quiet girl from stepping out in front of a train. After spending a night stuffing their faces and playing games, the girl is gone. Three years later, the trio is reunited, but the once quiet girl is now firey and troubled. Kaito must now learn to balance his feelings for her while trying to unravel the mystery behind her suicide attempt three years prior.

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#45

Ah sorry about that, I knew I reviewed Deathchasers before, my mind just went blank for a moment and I forgot.


#46

I should be done fingers crossed with my current rotation by the end of today, so will check out your request after. You’re neither denied not accepted at this time.


#47

Awesome. I will follow as soon as I hear back. Thanks for the consideration.


#48

Hi, I apologise it took longer to get back to you than I expected. I am sorry but declined.


#49

Hi, I have a question. Do you take requests in which the chapter is on Google Docs rather than on Wattpad (because I want it critiqued before it’s published)?


#50

I do


#51

Title: Downward Spiral

Author: @RavensOfOld

Genre: Young Adult, Short Story

Summary: Two years after high school graduation, two former best friends meet up. The difference? One has left the path of crime and is now a college student aiming to be a lawyer, while the other continues to be a notorious criminal, spiralling down his own hell hole. Dallas Whittaker begins to reflect what made him worship the godly rebel in their early years. When returning to seek answers in the aftermath of a house party, Dallas realizes that the truth may not be what he expected.

Anything Else: Please focus on plot, flow, characterization, emotion, where it could be imporved on narrative wise, etc.

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I’ll send you the link via PM if you accept.


#52

Accepted. Please complete payment and PM me the link.


#53

Payment has been completed and the PM link has been sent!


#54

Understood. Am I allowed to ask why?


#55

I read through most of the first chapter and I just didn’t feel hooked. I’m sorry.


#56

I gotcha. Thanks for your time, anyhow.


#57

Title: Dreamt

Author: @lily1066xc

Genre: Teen Fiction

Short Summary: Elise Silva exists only in the shadow of her twin Jeremy. The lack of attention she receives in reality causes her to find solace only when she dreams where she is always with Jay. Jay provides her constant company, protection, and reassurance. However, when she meets Luke, Jay completely disappears from her dreams. Although devastated by Jay’s abrupt disappearance, Luke pushes Elise to open herself up more and shows her the benefits of manifesting her reality over the facade of living in a dream.

Anything else This is my first time writing! So far I only have one chapter posted and I am working on more, so please go ham on the critiques hahahah :

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#58

Accepted.


#59

bump


#60

Heya,
I’d like some feedback on my story.
Title: The Convention (Ab)Use

Author: @Orumeena

Genre: Short Story/General Fiction

Short Summary: A guy and his group of friends have to deal with someone who is almost above the law.

Anything else: Wondering if my characterisation is a little flat and whether I should make the writing more engaging. I’d like feedback on the summary too.

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#61

Accepted. Please complete payment.


#62

Grazie. *flies towards bank to complete payment…


#63

@lily1066xc and @Orumeena
I apologize for how long it took to complete your requests, but I have completed them regardless. Again, I apologize, but thank you for requesting. :heart: