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#64

Title: Zeitgeist

Author: GhostsInside

Genre: Romance

Short Summary: fter a mysterious scandal puts her public relations’ firm on edge, Aaliyah is one step closer to becoming unemployed.

Octavio Castellano makes a horrible decision.

Ever since he was betrayed in his last relationship, Octavio is sick and tired of deceit. He begins to question everything he’s known as he harbors the loss of identity, but gains the desire for revenge and lust.

When they realize that they need each other for their jobs, the lines between their careers and personal lives are blurred to a point of no return.

Anything else: Chai Latter - Can the critique be sent through PM?


#65

Declined


#66

Bump


#67

Form:

Title: Do I Know You?

Author: @ShipiGee
Genre: Romance (mature and adult)

Short Summary: A troublesome girl, Micki Waters, meets a serious business head Jared Donovan who wouldn’t tolerate her shenanigans. They are indulged in a forceful situation where Micki wants to expose Jared but he has a serious set of skeletons in his closet which are somehow related to Micki. It seems like Jared knows something about her and Micki isn’t aware about the emotional and stressful drama set to roll in her life soon.

Anything else writing style, emotions and reactions, grammar, character development :

Password: Favorite drink- lemonade/coffee


#68

Accepted. Please complete payment


#69

Title: Dear Bully
Author: @TockAC
Genre: Short Story
Short Summary: I will be posting a series of letters written by me about a person who has bullied you most of your life.
Anything else: I hope that you spread the word about anti-bullying that I’m trying to share with all of the Wattpad readers.
Password: Lemonade

I have just followed you on Wattpad. Payment complete.


#70

Declined


#71

Title: The Disease Called Men

Author: @_quinta

Genre: Teen Fiction / Humour

Short Summary: Who needs boys? Certainly not Aldenbury Girls Grammar School!

Just when everything begins to finally fall into place, it falls apart-at least, for student council president Cerise. Cerise will do everything in her power to prevent Aldenbury from becoming co-ed. That includes bribery, coercion and maybe even the use of blackmail (which she may or may not have orchestrated the events herself). Along with her loyal, albeit reluctant group of friends, she has one goal in her mind:

Eliminate this disease called men.

Anything else Anything I can improve on?

Password: Water lmaooo I’m so boring

Thank you for your time :heart:


#72

Title: The Price of Beauty

Author: @miramallows

Genre: Teen Fiction

Short Summary: Claire Johnson is a perfectly simple girl - simple hair, name, life and everything else. Until she gets a free pass into skipping a year of school, and she realises she could be a bit more than silly 'ol Plain Jane. Through different events, she tries to figure out The Price of Beauty.

Anything else this is where you can tell me what, if anything, to focus on. : Nothing really ~

Password: Monster Energy. I swear, I’m not a lame emo kid i swear


#73

@_quinta and @miramallows

accepted, please complete payment.


#74

Done, completed :nerd_face: Thank you for accepting


#75

Payment completed. Thanks. :relaxed:


#76

I have edited my previous payment to you.


#77

The password now is Lemonade.


#78

Form:

Title: A Maiden’s Kitty.

Author: The Malevolent Creator (@TheMCOfficial, me)

Genre: Romance (LGBT)

Short Summary: (I need to work on my summary… so I only have this at the moment.) A shut-in and a runaway… both felt segregated because of their differences to what’s considered normal. Perhaps their meeting is what fate had in store for them?
These two will remain at each other’s side forever… because love knows no boundaries.

Anything else: I need someone to take just an overall look at it. Something just doesn’t feel right.

Password: Rubicon Passion Fruit! >:D


#79

Still declined


#80

Accepted, please complete payment


#81

Okie dokie. I’ve just done it! Thanks.


#82

Title: What’s left of me

Author- PaigeRain_stories

Genre-Romance

Summary-After Anastasia survives a fatal car crash that her boyfriend Cole and best friend Bella died in She is lost. It’s her start of junior year and she has to mend the crack their death left in her heart. She feels that she will never be able to love anyone again,and that my be true.
On her first day of junior year Anastasia meets the new boy River. River is mysterious, gorgeous, and Anastasia is intrigued by him. However she refuses to get to close in fear of loving him as much as she loved Cole or possibly more. Can River help Anastasia face her fears and mend her cracked heart? Will river help Anastasia uncover parts of herself Cole never could have?
This book has a little something for everyone love, drama, adventures, and a little magic

Nothing else

Password- Sweet tea


#83

Title: Yung Yakuza Trilogy: Broken

Author: JJohnson-Pitter

Genre: Fantasy/Romance/Mystery/Crime

Short Summary: Luna was told that she was the world’s number one singer. She was told she had a voice of an Angel blessed by God. She was told to speak 15 different languages and learn them fluently.

Be the good girl. The perfect girl. The girl of the male gaze.

She was told to go to a place she was never even told of before.

She wasn’t told that she would discover untold secrets or that her punishment would change her forever.

For better or for worse.

Anything else chapter flow and characterisation :

Password: 7-up