Steph's Critiques


So creative, I know :wink:


  • A critique/review of your first chapter.


Everything but horror (sorry but I gotta sleep tonight).

Please complete the payment when you’re accepted, thank you!



Book: Club Cupid



My book: Sojourner The Thralls of Dusk


@EllenFairyBlue4 & @ABaldric

Accepted :slight_smile:


Would appreciate feedback to my book. And would love to give back to yours!

Loving Ivy’s Colorful Mind


Accepted :slight_smile:


I’d love it if you could review my first chapter!
My book- The World Changer.


Accepted :smiley:


Thank you :smile:!


Would love it if you took on my first chapter.
Thank you :smile:


I would love some feedback on my book (if you enjoy reading it, feel free to keep on reading!)
Title: The Legend of the Moonflower Princess
Genre: Fantasy, High Fantasy, Epic Fantasy
Summary: A young woman must rescue her adopted younger brother from a mad sorcerer


payment is complete


Just Survive
It’s the end of the world and Mara and Aris are alone and barely surviving. In the beginning, Mara and her mother spent months behind the safe walls of an abandoned school, but with overpopulation, their safe haven turned into a war zone. Though Mara doesn’t know how things went down after she escaped, she knows that her mother never found her like she had promised. Aris, however, spent his first few months in solitude with his younger brother Isaac, but when times became rough, he too lost someone he loves. As they fight internal and external battles, they learn that moving on is the only option, but how will this align with the world of which they live? Can they overcome the obstacles they face as they fight to survive, or will the world break them before they get the chance?


Title: Ravien
Author: @Svoosh
Genre: High Fantasy

Thank you!


Payment was to be completed after you were accepted.


@FreAkIsHly_NorMaL Accepted

@nicolettem64 Sorry but no, zombies give me nightmares.

@Svoosh I looked at your book and damn, I have no feedback for you, so passing. I have added it to my reading list, though :slight_smile:


Aw thanks so much! I hope you enjoy reading it as much as I enjoy writing it. :slight_smile:


I did, thank you!


Hi! If you’re willing, I would love a critique on my book Beauty is Terror.


Passing because I don’t have feedback for you. I do love your opening, very grabby!