Steph's Critiques


Book: When Life Gives You Lemons

Thank you so much! (:


Thank you so much! I really appreciate it


Accepted :slight_smile:


I’m game to give it a go Ms. Steph, but I don’t know if you’re into my kinda story or not. It’s a poly (threesome) LGBTQ paranormal romance. Interest piqued? Let’s read for read! Totally turned off by a book like that? No worries, I have another one you might like by a friend of mine. If you accept her novel, I’ll read and critique your story in her place. Thanks mucho!

LEAD ME ASTRAY - The gay poly love triangle
THE SKYLAR EXPERIMENT - The teen sci-fi drama


Accepted! I’m just editing the chapter again, can you critique it after? I’ll drop a note to let you know when it’s done :slight_smile: Just figured I’d fix the mistakes before more people critique it.


Thank you! Just shoot me a message when you’re ready :slight_smile:


If you could do mine I would gladly appreciate it.

Genre: Urban Fantasy


Accepted but the same as above, can I message you when I’m ready to be critiqued? :slight_smile:


Absolutely! Let me know when you’re ready to go :slight_smile:


Thank yoou!


@odemira & @lesserknown1

I’ve re-posted the chapter! Thank you for waiting - I’ll start critiquing your books now.


Thank you :heart: I’ll go do yours now


Headed your way now. You work fast, btw :smiley:


Hi, do you mind critquing my story Be Alright?

I’m going to start reading and critiquing your book soon right before I go to bed! :smiley:


Yes :slight_smile: Just know there’s two versions of Baby Steps (because the edits were so different, had to post em as a new book on my profile).


Really? So the version I’ve read is the unedit one?


Since I’m chopping and changing the storyline around, I’ve posted it as a new book on my profile, which I did like in the first post :slight_smile:


Oh I only have your original story in my library I’ll go change that.

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