TAGALOG-ENGLISH STORIES REVIEW AND FEEDBACK ( PINOY WRITER HERE) - [FIRST FIVE CHAPTERS]

CRITIQUES AND FEEDBACKS FOR THE FIRST FIVE CHAPTERS OF YOUR STORY,
isama na natin 'yong PREFACE, SYPNOSIS AND PROLOGUE if meron…

This thread was created to help other pinoy writers like me who are new in wattpad and trying to start their story.
How can I help you?

  1. Dagdag follow…
  2. Dagdag friends… dapat friendly tayo dito sa wattpad community…
  3. Dagdag reads… (more friends, more reads syempre)
  4. I WILL GIVE AN HONEST FEEDBACK ABOUT YOUR STORY… so sana open tayo sa mistakes and suggestions… BAWAL MAYABANG AT MAPAGMATAAS… chill lang okay?

PAYMENT:
Simple lang hahaha…

  1. READ AND REVIEW THE FIRST FIVE CHAPTERS NG STORY KO…
  2. FOLLOW ME
  3. PM MO KO GUSTO KO NG MGA KA PM EH…
    yan lang… heheheh…

THE REVIEW WILL BE SENT THROUGH PM… PARANG ANG PANGET KASI PAG IKO-COMMENT SA MISMONG STORY…
I’ll PM you my review… then PM niyo din 'yong review nyo sa akin…

PARA SA MGA STORIES NYO, KINDLY FOLLOW THIS FORMAT:
USERNAME: ____________
STORY TITLE: _______________

MAGTULUNGAN TAYONG LAHAT MGA PINOY WATTPAD WRITERS!! WHEEEEEE!
SALAMAT!

Hii! I’ll read youuurs! I’ll let you know once I am doneee!

Title: ONCE A WALLFLOWER: When will this story be mine?
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/201516598-once-a-wallflower-when-will-this-story-be-mine
Cover:

Like everybody I am a teenager who’s into watching Korean dramas, cause why not? I mean it’s nice to feel romantically excited with someone else’s story, right?

Well call me scaredy-cat but I think this is the safest way to fall in the “idea” of love without getting broke.

Mentioning the characters! They are damn so perfect, they are really the ideals. Frankly, there are some scenes we wished we experienced.

You feel me? I know.

I wonder if there’s such story for like “me.”
When will the story be mine?

First of all, I am no perfect but just an ordinary.

(English story in a Filipino setting and culture)

USERNAME: @wordsfromgray
STORY TITLE: Fragments Of Her Soul
https://www.wattpad.com/692978235-fragments-of-her-soul-ongoing-novel-ga19-book

Follow kita sa wattpad a. hehe. Tapos basahin ko din story mo sa weekends. thanks!