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14.The Unspeakables AprilCox7:small_blue_diamond:

15.The COLOUR of your voice DanielNgo5 :small_blue_diamond:

16.Bonded Mate RLTiger :small_blue_diamond:

17.The Lord of the Island IWJKeller :small_blue_diamond:

18.somebody to you imtotallynotokay

19.You’re My Kind Of Wrong thatblondreader


1.Game of Mass Destruction @chloboshoka

2.The Transcendent Vindicator @nightwish435

3.A Breath of Light @anastasiakuebler

4.Gradually @chiminities

5.Burn For You @bidiyakdamian

6.Little things @leighyeann

7.Science, eternal life, and a travel circles @AloofFloof

8.Velvet Garden @murmurare

9.Obsession @NicaZacarias

10.The Reaper @NuclearJuggernaut

11.Melancholy @elfoxwood

12.Children Of Bor @MkundeAkomo

13.Lola @est1894

14.Frozen Flame @Scaren

15.The Forsaken Forest

@Not_Your_Typical_Guy

16. Me And You? Or You And Him? @EleniKoutellas

17.Silver Bullets @Mellisa2731

18.The Collided World @CLSwritings

19.The Face in the House @amyschmitty

20.Shadowborn @ArmindoSenpai


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1.How to be Forever Alone @MelanieGravel

2.The Paladin & The Incognito @PhatLyTri

3.The First Lie @InGeenious

4.I’m fine @savanna_x

5.A Changed World @Greg200018

6.Tangled love @_itz_shifana

7.LIFE-Jealousy @MariaFilocomo

8.The Alpha’s Flame (soon to be Blaze in the Darkness ). @FireAlwaysReturns

9 .12:01 @AverySummers

10.The Fall Of mangiatorvi @Ivy279

11. Jacket and the stars @eternalstardust

12. The legends of love @AneesaBadu

13.Expelled from hell @laynejodi

14.The Last Messenger by @JasminesNovels

15.Mimi’s Guide to Definitely Not Being Kidnapped by Faeries @_Sanguine

16.HER VS. I @ethxcs

17.Cole, 2653 @DavidTLee

18.Scarlet @Jade-Louise96

19.racing down sunset boulevard
@original_fireheart

20.Healers @thisisneverthatxo


1.heart of darkness @AmrutaBelambe

2. take me away @dysanic

3.Al Nadaha @aya_sherif

4.Shire Bottom Chronicles @Evenstar606

5.Good Enough @_rishiika

6.Imperfectly Loved @sara_ligadge

7.Carmine @Ashlurstine

8.THe end of me in a diary @Nii_YA

9.Triplicity @LauraTLeeAuthor

10.Ugly nerd @lulubrasil0

11.AdLunam- A Kingdom At War @IDA_X23

12.The Keeper’s Curse @DianaHarrison8

13.Carlie Cipher @IvashkovLightwood

14.inside @dexipher

15.Silent Integrity @KhadijaAhmed98

16.Swiped @turtleswords

17.The Devil Worshipper @partofmycharm

18.Vitality @Crysta_Levere

19. Storming Session by @Callester

20. Celebrity house @bffhiz111


1.outcast by @imk1709

2. The Rich Side @elinenoor

3.Life Into Pages @Incomplete_dreams

4.Motivational Ignorance @cuteiatts

5. Ugly @soniyaahirwar

6.Project New Eden @KirbyMarshall

7.Elemental University: Year One @SummerSommer

8.Prince of Kammpenda @SummerSommer

9.The King of Hearts @phattimaddi

10.Hearts of Faith @RyanPaigeHoward

11.A Head Full of Dreams @reedandwrite

12.nemesis @asgardianhela

13.Eve of Eden @Sohlll

14.wishful thinking @wanderdusting

15.Novelty of Noah @angelljosie

16.Retrograde @HanSoulo

17. A spy’s daughter’s @SisterSpectre

18.The Thief of Winter @amcbradley

19.Nothing Like Flying @guywortheyauthor

20.Four Twelve @MclaineMoran


1.James and Jamie @lavenderlove

2.A Legacy of Mist and Fire @JWWang

3. Stockholm syndrome @radified

4.Her @angiexxddl

5.everafter @IvashkovLightwood

6.Among the Fallen @thesongist

7.Magpie Black @copyedit

8:A Warriors Awakening:A New Life Part 1 @cawinbush00

9.Obsidian @Siennafrost

10.Mistress Honeycomb And The Bad @225lily

11.Odes of Old @Bunnygunny

12.WE ARE OMENS @veturiuss

13.BLACK BLOOD Crowns @veturiuss

14.The Keeper @PhoenixSWhytock

15.Blank Sheet @NymTonks1

16.OCEAN EYES ★ parker [1] :ocean: @sspiderling

17. Suddenly Become A mercenary @MaxwellKHA

18.contractually-forbidden @_bitsandpieces

19.Home @kmmmcekd

20.Darkened @teddybear6780


1.Ouroboros @Sandcat

2.Blissful Blooms @CoralScholes

3.Battle of Elements @Ebruwrites

4.Offshore @caducity-of-life

5.free @smile_kun

6. After you @missallamerican1997

7.Rising Wind @Mary-Evans

8.Somewhere Across the Channel @LEvAltfeldt

9.rule of beasts @scar-l

10.The Hall of Records @AustrealisInk

11.I will have my revenge! (I will have you) [BL] @LittleDitto

12.Takdir @natanaels_en

13.Angel Tears @marslias

14.How To Supervise Hell @TroublemakerPonyhead

15.Gameplay @EUN01A

16.My Name is War @Huntokar

17. TEMPORARY LOVE @Thatservergirl

18.The Moonlit Gallows @SLMahon

19. Love or Lie @Justyenery

20.The Apprentice & the Lost City. @justalex99


1.Time at Standstill @Silveralia

2. Phoenix Pact Into the Marvel Universe @The-Zero

3. A Dark Secret @JulMa97

4.Of Sinner & Saints @ahurarwyn

5. Tale of Destruction @Nitrospin

6.Night Watch @Nitrospin

7.The Wolf and his Moon
@farthestdarkeststar

8.Lime and Soda @iridescent-lights

9.A Distant Wail of a Princess @raghad-osama

10.Perfect lies @make_a_wish071

11.Unending Trails @Rogue1nferno

12. The longitude of gold @LaDevotee101

13.New Years With Winters @JJuno

14.The Hidden Secret @Marenix21

15.philophobia @Natasha_1512

16.Darker Clouds @katievega

17Reminiscia @SerdraGondex

18.The Guardians of Eden @RobotiSC

19.The Wings of Storm @draphy

20.Dreamy Reality @Hadley_Swiss


1.Awoken @CoLLoRBLiND

2.LONER BOY AND THE LONELY GIRL VOLUME 2
DESC- @scmore21

3. The Thief of Lost Time @daveriese

4. Humans and Monsters: Pride and Wing @UnKn0wN_Merchant

5. Clocking in on Highway 118 @RyanChimes

6.Two Can Keep A Secret @axa_reads

7. We who pave the milky-way @PaveTheWay

8.The Commander of Orion @Lilly_Orchid

9.Extraordinary Ordinary @CutThePages

10.Insanity @NichelleDiamond

11.Key of Liberation @ShinomiyaDR

12.Humanity’s Fallen Lullabies @RhymesandFools

13.Into the Forest @I_Dxnt_Even_Knxw

14. Dangerously obsessed @blackangel1212

15. Becoming a Luna @blackangel1212

16.The Celestials: Obsessed and Disoriented @LizzieRivers

17.Dragon Tales @amayhh

18.The Scent of Roses @SuperstitiousTaurus

19.Artistica @ModernWaterRider

20.Windows: The Pertinence and Perpetuality of Stone @Vanvani_VV


1. Rainbow Guardians @Nelly_Starfields

2.Spirit Of Infinity @jaylendreams

3. heart that’s inside @writerAAPifer

4.Thunderstorm @Revan1466

5.Meine Flucht-1 @youraverage_joe

6.Realm @Pkpages

7.Destruction @notanyone13

8.Secrets Never Stay Buried @KarisMing

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The Unspeakables @AprilC

Chapter (1) To be honest I really don't know what I feel about this first chapter. I feel like this is like a Harry Potter meets like One Directions. Don't get me wrong the story seems really interesting but it's just hard to get into because like I feel like I'm in a Harry Potter story because of once again The Elves and the owls in the wands, so it's me it's like I'm reliving Harry Potter but with One Direction as well because of the whole Liam. So I'm not sure where the story's going to go, but so far it's Unique let's put it that way.

Chapter (2) So I figured out the story is tough to get into because. I’m taking it comes after Voldemort and Harry battle because once again friends passed away. It’s just really hard to get into this story because you’re putting Harry Potter in fanfiction and that’s what I think this is a fanfiction. And I’m not big on Fanfictions don’t get me wrong they’re friendly but so many people don’t make it different they don’t make it original they don’t make it feel like it should be a story. Don’t get me wrong the author does an outstanding job with this, but it’s so hard to get into the account once again because there’s so much Harry Potter in it like you can tell that it’s a fanfiction. Harry Potter Harry Potter Fred dies George is dealing with at Jenny’s trying to help him just simple things like that. It just makes it hard to appreciate the story because of that, and then the main characters also involved. Oh, I think she’s dealing with the secret society just like Harry Potter had. So it’s just a lot to take in, and it’s hard to really sit down and enjoy the story as much as I would like.

These are my thoughts for the chapters readers :grin:

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The Unspeakables @AprilC

Chapter (3) I feel like the main character has good intentions but at the same time I feel like Jax evil. And because of that will not Jax my bad Liam is evil, Jax is like a brother to her. So I make me feel like something Liam is has done in the past is making him like under like the kind of like house arrest but except you're a wizard. So I'm not sure what's going on with me I'm if he's like a child of somebody's like maybe volmore if he's playing out evil I don't know. The story singing to progressed well I think the thing that gets me is that in every chapter, the authors asking questions that are kind of like don't need to be asked. I think that if they need help with the story that they should get critiqued things like that. Because kind of throws the readers off Chapter (4) It seems like the story is doing just like Harry Potter except it's with the main character. Because once again her parents died before the war and it's a sad story, and she has people that she can find then there are evil people. So it's just like a Harry Potter story, but after the war which I mean I get it, but it's not original sorry if that offends people. But as a reader to me, this is not original; it's no different than Harry Potter except it's a girl who lost her parents because of evil once again. So for me, the story is not interesting; it's lack of originality because once again there's an order and the Harry Potter characters are in there. And there's an evil person and her parents died from being killed. So for me I I don't know I'm not very big on it.

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The Unspeakables @AprilC

Chapter (5) The Story seems like a good story in the, main character seems very strong. But once again to me, it's just another Harry Potter story but written differently in away. It's nothing too exciting as a reader; it's a story that I would not continue reading personally. Because I don't see it being any different than a normal Harry Potter book. Yeah there are some differences like Fred's dad, and George is struggling to deal with it, and his sister's trying to help, but I mean. In the end, it's Harry Potter in the future after the war I mean they're still an organization that secretive there still a bad guy there's a hero. And to me, it's just nothing too different or original that sets it out.

Final Score 3/10

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The COLOUR of your voice @DanielNgo5

you are next on my list I will start reading your book Today or tomorrow Also, remember unless told otherwise you will be tagged in every review. Thank you for your patience.
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Hey, Thanks for doing this. I’d love to hear what you think of my book Extraordinary Ordinary - It just has 4 parts at the minute.

Extraordinary Ordinary

4 Chapters

https://www.wattpad.com/myworks/196715211-extraordinary-ordinary

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you have been added to my waitlist when a spot opens up I will add you to my queue. Remember that there is no timeline for the waitlist, also please remember to be patient for I am a mother and I do have a life outside of Wattpad
you are welcome it will take me some time. But I will be glad to read and review it. Have a wonderful day 😁

Thanks very much :slight_smile:

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You're link isn't working I got it you are welcome 😁

Insanity

5 chapters (1 prologue and 4 chapters) has chapter list and others

https://www.wattpad.com/story/193010739-insanity

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you have been added to my waitlist when a spot opens up I will add you to my queue. Remember that there is no timeline for the waitlist, also please remember to be patient for I am a mother and I do have a life outside of Wattpad
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No problem. I appreciate your time. Thank you​:heart::heart::heart:

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you are more welcome