War Fam


#1243

My phone isn’t being broken but same for the first part :joy: it’s alright.

And sure for the second, thanks. Give me a few minutes to get crap sorted out (a few minutes can be anything from 10 to an hour so don’t wait around too much)


#1244

Shino is lurking anyway, so :woman_shrugging:


#1245

GUYS IM HOME NOW!!!


#1246

WELCOME BACK!!! HOW WAS YPUR TRIP?


#1247

@ShinomiyaDR - what are you stuck with?


#1248

last chap, MC had nightmare, runs off, gets confronted by other characters. he vomits, then one character says, let’s go home. this chap will be next day and the aftermath.


#1249

You write fantasy?


#1250

yep. a LN portal science fantasy in KoL.


#1251

Maybe you could have like the nightmare be linked to like something that’s about to happen?


#1252

it is. it’s his first lock encounter. this chap happens the day after the characters confront him cuz he didn’t sleep.


#1253

hmmmm


#1254

maybe you could write from another pov that adds to the plot?


#1255

I don’t know… idk how adding Cyan would add to the plot.


#1256

IT WAS GOOD BUT I GOT SICK A BIT


#1257

:face_vomiting:


#1258

:sob::sob::sob:

tis also KoL arc 2.


#1259

ITS GOOD THAT IT WAS GOOD BUT SORRY YOU GOT SICK


#1260

who wants to play devil’s advocate?


#1261

sounds fun


#1262

I’m still stuck but have 2 seeds. wanna help?