I’m working on my superhero novel, Atomic, and so far I have had 4 reviewers so far say that they felt the story required more introduction. But I don’t know how to fit in the description without slowing down the chapter? I just want to make sure it grabs the attention, and that it isn’t a boring opening, or one like what Nick mentioned in his AMA.
Any help is appreciated, and thank you! Anyone else having problems with this?