Many people love them and many people hate them but there is no denying that they are one of the most successful genre’s out there. I know we have all read at least one or two, it is what I write actually so I was wondering what irks you the most when you are reading one. Here are a few thoughts of mine.
The couple goes from complete strangers to having sex overnight.
Overly describing every outfit that every character is wearing. A few are ok but excessively is just frustrating.
Using profanity constantly for no apparent reason. Sometimes it does help your story along or feel necessary for emphasis but it should not be every other word.