What's going on in your story?


#1190

War elves attacking a town.


#1191

Hello Hello, I am looking for a few ppl who can help me with my book i need a few reviews is anyone willing to read my story and fill out a review page. I would be eternally grateful and be willing to feature you as review person in my book.


#1192

I finished the River Viper’s pov chapter, so I feel a bit disoriented now, going back to Xi.

I left Xi when he discovered that they time skipped when they went to the Celestial Realm so now I will be writing the losing the war chapters.


#1193

In my book The Legend of the Moonflower Princess, Sahara and Donovan got rescued by the guardian of Darienne Kamau, the oracle of White Mountain. She sends Donovan through to the kingdom of White Mountain and is about to tell Sahara what the main villain, Kane Gin Shita, is planning to do.


#1194

Tweaking the Japanese / French fusion so it feels less like merely blending the two languages.

Ex. Francaise hanasemasu ka? Ou Parlez-vous Nihongo?

It’s taking up a lot of time, but I feel like I can write my fiction more effectively once it’s done.


#1195

Right now, everyone is relaxing from the second faction battle. Theon’s team is dealing with the fact that the news just leaked their secret identities and Ceves’s team is getting fan mail and talking about politics.


#1196

Theon is in trouble? Can you direct me to the book?


#1197

I just had to kill off two boys, suicides. The air set itself on fire and they stayed. William had no hope when he heard everything was gone. He sat down and not even Amynda or Timothy could get him up. Daryl picked up amynda and ran. The boys had given her a look of knowing. That if one of them stays they both stay. Holding hands crying with loving looks at eachother, Tilly and Wally began their ascent to heaven to rejoin their families. Known each other since birth. Heartbreaking. Honestly this apoclyspe stuff is depressing


#1198

Nice idea. Japanese and French :slight_smile:


#1199

Who is the heroine? Sarah or Kamau?


#1200

Full of action huh?


#1201

Losing the war my my


#1202

if two teenage boys comitting suicide during the zombie apocalypse is action then kill me


#1203

Hi hi I’m Chinthaka Nanayakkara from Colombo Sri Lanka. Here are my writer team https://my.w.tt/BORtzct2JT

They will surely help :smile:


#1204

It is action :slight_smile:


#1205

Whats the town?


#1206

Is there two books?


#1207

Willing to take the ride :slight_smile:


#1208

Planning is very important :slight_smile:


#1209

One other aspect that makes it difficult: I’m less interested in explicit Science Fantasy, as almost a kind of “Pseudo-Fantasy”, a scifi setting with a simulated fantasy world.