Will Give Honest Feedback~! (PT2)

Hey everyone! I’m back again to give some feedback. So I’ll get straight to the point.

What I can do: Provide feedback! I will only read a MAX of three chapters. I won’t read anything with extreme gore/violence or lqbtq themes. I am okay with all genres except for what was mentioned.

Payment: You can either follow me. Vote for the three first chapters, or leave a simple comment on the three chapters of my story( https://www.wattpad.com/story/202746145-the-last-symphony). Whichever you find easier. PLEASE WAIT until I have accepted. Once accepted, please give me 2-5 days to complete.

Edit 1: PLEASE WAIT UNTIL I’VE ACCEPTED. SOME PEOPLE HAVE BEEN GOING STRIGHT TO PAYMENT. THIS IS TO SAVE YOU TIME AND ME TIME. IF YOU PAY ME WITHOUT HAVING BEING ACCEPTED, AND I REJECT IT, I WON’T TAKE RESPONSIBILITY.

Other than that, have a wonderful day!

Hi there! I wondered if you’d be interested in my story but kind of a weird request, would you be willing to read chapters 7-9?

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After I Fall

Army Sergeant Braeden Sampson has been missing for seven years after a mission during his deployment in Afghanistan went terribly wrong.

For Abbey, losing her husband to the war with no closure is more than she’s able to cope with. To escape the pain she turns to drugs, abandoning her daughter in the process. After a move to New York City, life isn’t any easier, coping with her addiction and trying to make ends meet with an enabling roommate. Only after an embarrassing encounter with a billionaire finance man, does she receive the opportunity that could change her life forever.

Cole Donner is that billionaire. He also has a secret. With a demanding career on the line and the new responsibility of raising his two young, troubled brothers, he does whatever he can to hide it. Finally succumbing and receiving the worst possible news, he’s forced to hire a live-in manager slash nanny to handle his affairs. A crazy twist of fate lands Abbey in his interview hot seat, someone he never counted on seeing again.

Hi there!!
It would really like if you can check out the first 2 chapters of my story.
So here is the link: https://my.w.tt/p3xtr1WP70

Hello! I started my book Before Dawn and I would really love if you could give me some feedback on it!

Hi! I’d really appreciate some feedback on my story Namesake :slight_smile: There are only two chapters right now. Thank you so much!

https://www.wattpad.com/799467715-namesake-introduction

Hello! I would be very pleased if you could read my story! It has three effective chapters and one of aesthetics. You can skip that if you want!
Here’s the story: https://www.wattpad.com/796146327-𝕥𝕙𝕦𝕟𝕕𝕖𝕣𝕤𝕥𝕣𝕦𝕔𝕜-꡶꡶-ʙɪʟʟʏ-ʜᴀʀɢʀᴏᴠᴇ-season-one

Hey~ Three is the max I can do due to time constraints. I’ll accept your story! Next time, please wait until I’ve accepted before giving me payment. Thank you! :smiley:

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Sorry about that! 3 is no problem

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Hi there! I’ll accept your story, next time, please wait until I’ve accepted it before issuing payment thank you!

Hello! Accepted! Let me know once you’re done with payment in order for me to get started. Thank you!

Done!

Title: Dimensional Travel Companions

Chaps: 5. 3 Chaps/week

Humanity and the NOAH race declare war on each other because the result of a human research on parallel universes shows that it is possible to travel to other universes through a black hole. NOAH, afraid of humanity gaining overwhelming superiority, launches a large-scale war to obtain research material.

As the war rages on, a homunculus scientist secretly completes the research that everyone is fighting for and steals humanity’s most advanced spacecraft, departing shortly afterward towards the black hole.

(OBS: English is not my main language, so sorry if there are some minor errors. :slight_smile: )

https://www.wattpad.com/story/203910721-dimensional-travel-companions

Hi! I’ve accepted your story, please wait until I’ve accepted to start payment. I do not watch the show “stranger things” so a lot of things were lost on me, and I wasn’t able to give you constructive feedback. I would have rejected this, but since you had given feedback to mine I returned the favor.

Accepted! Please let me know once you’re done with payment for me to get started! Thank you!

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Done!
Your history looks very promising! :slight_smile: )

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the right one for me
link:https://www.wattpad.com/myworks/205211413-the-right-one-for-me
summary:Leslie Atkinson had a rough childhood. After many failed relationships, she meets Nathan Bancroft, her neighbor will sparks fly between them. Follow Leslie on her story of finding her right match
chapters you have to read:1 to 3

Sounds good to me!

Title: Claimed by the Sicilian Mafia
Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/202978042

Thank you!

Accepted! Please let me know once you’re done with payment!