This is a rather simple game, but it is an effective way of getting feedback on your opening paragraph.
Before posting anything please read the rules!
Before posting the first paragraph of your book you need to say what you think of the one above you. Then and only then, can you post your own and wait until the next person comes along and reviews yours.
Please be nice to other users, no arguments here. If someone doesn’t like your first paragraph perhaps ask them how you could improve it (unless they have already said how).
Treat others views with respect.