Hey guys, I just finished a book and I’m about to write the blurb for a new book, but the protagonist and antagonist descriptions are giving me a hard time. The protagonist is a cop named Red Young that left his job after having a breakdown of losing his best friend in the line of duty. On the one year anniversary of his partners death, he finds himself being brought back into the police force after an old murder spree that goes beyond time and space had came back and is connected with his best friend back when they were kids. The antagonist I haven’t figured out what he would be yet but he is known as David, the caretaker and he’s only called that whenever he introduces himself to his victims. When the cops finds the victims, they weren’t just killed, they were cremated and their ashes were buried along with tombs stones with their names, date of birth/death and the cause of death and each death is different…much different. Red starts searching for the killer and along with people that not only become allies but they were connected with David as well.
How can I delve more deeper into the characters? What do I need to go towards and avoid?